one really good AU story... After reading this, I'm glad that good triumphed over evil in the anime.

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Hm interesting view! I like the personality in your writing a lot! Maybe not the best storyline, but your writing was fun to read, and this IS pretty original. Great job! Keep writing!

~Lindsey

oh dear...I'm happy they didn't let Zork win. Your idea of how it could be is a bit..ahum..mean. You have a nice writingstyle that is pleasant to read. But if you are going to use the title in the beginning, (quote: ...Is another man's heaven.) then actually put it there otherwise it's a bit confusing. Although I did like it, it's different, but I had to look twice.

~chibi mii