Reviews for Naruto no Kimyōna Bōken: Shippuden |
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Omnipotence08 chapter 1 . 1/31 Up please |
avjuan37 chapter 19 . 8/30/2019 iui please make more chapters |
tylerbraden13 chapter 19 . 1/7/2019 uppdatttteeeee |
Roadmaster9000 chapter 4 . 10/5/2018 Holy crap! This story is awsome! Please update soon! |
Dewpoint chapter 19 . 5/24/2018 I can't believe it took me this long to discover this fic but wow, this is super well done. It really feels like you succeeded at meshing the Naruto cast into the JoJoverse and the execution of the JoJo tropes feels on point with this fic. The Stands are believable, the gratuitous engrish is on point, and the plot characters feel legit. It looks like you've chosen to focus on other projects, which is a shame but I have a ton of respect for this fic and how well you've essentially built up a believable JoJo plot using Naruto characters. Maybe someday you'll update, either way this is stellar writing and I hope you'll find a muse for this again! |
LegionnaireBlaze chapter 2 . 5/9/2018 I'm thinking the name of Naruto's Stand is 「DEMON HERMIT」. |
combativeThinker chapter 5 . 4/13/2018 I think you had some kind of formatting error. Everything is underlined. |
combativeThinker chapter 3 . 4/13/2018 NaruHina, eh? I see you're a man of culture as well. |
combativeThinker chapter 1 . 4/13/2018 Man, what a cliffhanger. This is a fine piece of work you have here. A few things: you were correct in your assumption that Persona was inspired by JoJo. In fact, the creator of Persona is quite the JoJo fanboy. Also, the title is spelled "Kimyo na Bouken." Just a heads-up before the grammar nazis arrive. |
Alfonse08 chapter 15 . 5/12/2017 I can't help but question the reasoning behind making Sakura a transvestite. Lee would have still been reluctant to hurt her sure, but he could have still used Overdrive to stun her. |
Angryboy13 chapter 2 . 3/23/2017 Best version of Naruto ever! |
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Alfonse08 chapter 19 . 2/8/2017 You've got a good story going here. A real shame you seem to have abandoned it. Hope you update it again one day. |
Locothehood chapter 19 . 1/13/2017 This should be intresting |
Locothehood chapter 4 . 1/13/2017 um dude how did he get drunk in jail? |