Good good

Good

Good

love it. really well written, candy for my mind!
that episode is one of the tougher moments for Clark & Lana, and you made it possible to turn around before she married that bastard. i really wish for more, how they manage to deal with Lex and everything with of course happy ending and a baby together :D

Shame thats where it ended i would have liked to see if what they planned actually came to fruition.

Great story! I kept wondering if Lana was going to find out that the pregnancy was fake in your story. I liked how Jor-El was worked into the story and was more of a father-figure to Clark. All in all, I think it had a well thought out plot, good character depth, and nice presentation. My only criticism is that the ending was quite abrupt. It would have been nice to see how Clark 'made her feel better'. ;) Anyway, great story. Keep up the good work! Really enjoyed it!

CLANA

This. Is. Amazing. Great job!

WOAH! Talk about a cliff-hanger! This is getting very good very fast! I'm a HUGE Clana fan, so I absolutely love this! Hope the next chapter is just as good! :D

This is turning out to be a really great story. You've put a more human aspect into Jor-El and it really works. It feels like Jor-El understands Clark more because they both know how it feels to love. Really great work. Keep it upF!

... And now it seems I'm on a mission to read your other stories, lol.

Also...

***In seconds, a thoroughly amazed Lana was taking her first look, for the second time, at the real Fortress of Solitude.***

I love that sentence.

that was good story

Not bad!

Loved it!

x Queen of Slayers x

Hello ...

Good Story, Great Work, I really like it, Keep it up!