As said before this story is really well developed and overlooked! I was a bit hesitant when the kids joined (not a fan of children in slash) but I got used to it really quickly and actually love how cute a family they all make! :D You should continue this because it really is very good!

The story is well developed. I like it overall. It is cute. I found it adorable when they got the two children. I like how realistic the development of the relationship and hardships were AS well as how Vincent handle his past. SO, thumbs up.

-loud happy squeal-

They want babies! -

Aw, the ending is so f*cking sweet! I squealed really loud -

And poking fun at Cloud is always fun :D

Me Lovie the Greatness Of your Chapters!

Theres only two things in this story that I hate:

1) Its ability to make me cry so easily, and

2) the fact that I make myself physically feel everyones emotional pain D:

I loved it because they're going to be okey now :0. I think..

-cries, hugging Cid-

So Sad D:

Good but Sad D:

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!

-jumps around, squealing happily-

They Love Each Other -

Another great -and really f*cking hot- chapter by you, the awesome writer! -loves-

Aw! -squeals like a retarded FanGirl-

So Cute!

I loves this one. Its so fluffy and aw!

Poor Vincent! -cries and holds him close-

That bastard Hojo should burn! Burn! BURN!

Hes so mean to Vincent D:

This was, yet again, a great chapter!

At the beginning of the scen its so adorable, almost like if Vincent didnt know what a mirror was. It made me giggle. After though I find it really sad that he thinks hes a Hideous Monster D: If I was there with him I'd be so mad that he thought that about himself! Hes like, almost the most gorgeous guy ever!

I like this chapter alot too!

This chapter grabbed me and threw me straight into a pool of happy! And I really dont understand why people arent reviewing this story. My sister read most of what you have up by now and she said it was really good! I cant wait to keep reading so I,m going to stop this review now. Just know that I'll probably be reviewing every chapter of this story and I probably wont even be saying anything important other than "I love It To Deathly Peices Of LoveAcid!"

gah! i can't BELIEVE this only got one review! this story is pure majesty, i LOVE it! oh please please please you have to write someMOAR! please? guh, this story is so awesoem and perfect and everything!

Okay. Lemme say something.

You are a fuckin' genius.

I don't know why, but this is the second story from you that I read. And this one is even better than the other one. I love they way you are telling the story and even though you think that sometimes something might have missed... I didn't feel like that. It was perfect.

And if you are going to write more of it - I will read it, that's for sure.