OH MY GOSH THAT IS AWESOME!

Hey, are you like obsessed with internal organs or something cuz it's kinda a weird obsession.

To be honest, I didn't really find this to be funny at all. Sorry If I sound a bit rude. I personally have read Eragon and found it to be an immensely enjoyable book, and while I understood your play on the names of characters which are associated with Eragon, I just didn't find this to be that laugh-inducing parody I was looking for. Sorry :

Ah a textbook example of Parody, glad to see someone else out there who knows how to parody things in the old way. One of the cleaner parody fics out there I've seen and worth the short read. I am surprised you didn't try the obvious name of 'Arrogant' for the main character. I was certain it had to have been taken by now since my own Parody was after, but as I now begin to read the other Parodies people have posted I'm finding very few similarities! Which is good because that means more humor for everyone! Hope you continue this.

One little nit pick though, your dialogue writing is a bit off, formatting-wise. I recently learned it myself and it does help with the flow of the story greatly. Basically every new character speaking gets their own paragraph and other such little differences, give it a google if your interested, I won't take up your review space with a detailed lesson especially if you aren't interested so you know, feel free to use/refuse anything I've said thus far! I'll be watching!

That is very very funny! I lol'd.

Hey, not bad! I'm ready For chapter 2!