| Reviews for Harry Potter and the Legitimate Businessmen |
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   gentledove2 chapter 1 . 8/29 A very clever and inventive story, if albeit a bit short! Nice job! |
| PappyOldGuy chapter 1 . 7/21 Intriguing and (well enough written in my opinion) a very good story. I like it, I like it a lot! It seems to be meshing the realities quite well, and I can hardly wait (but I will) to see where it all goes. I do know this, when someone who is not the creator of a character, writes about them, it is to have them do something that the creator doesn't want to or didn't think of. I know that I always think of my favorite characters doing things, I have never read of in books or seen them doing in movies. I think it is fantastic that others (here in "FanFiction") are actually writing their stories of what they want them to do in a "What If" world. For those who complain that the characters would not do this or that, forget them. You need to write this first for yourself, and then for the rest of us who do enjoy your take on what just might, could, should, would and probability (if a frog had wings, his ass wouldn't bump the ground nearly so often) can happen. I do know this as well, I am enjoying it and will follow it as long as you will write it. Also, do NOT feel pushed to post, sometimes the words and thoughts just flow and sometimes you have to cogitate for a bit. Just learn to let them grow at their own pace and those of us who appreciate them will be here to read them when they are posted. Thank you so much for sharing. |
| Annie Magus chapter 1 . 4/4 Second short story of yours that I've read on this lazy afternoon. Thank you for writing this! |
| suziq968 chapter 1 . 7/17/2019 Just too funny! Made me laugh out loud at five am when he said who he worked for. Awesome job. |
| tyrannicpuppy chapter 1 . 7/3/2019 Hilarious. Dark Lords fooled by red tape and bureaucracy is one of my fave fic types. And what a lovely ending too. Very funny piece. |
| Latarra chapter 1 . 6/13/2019 Nice. |
| kimjo2 chapter 1 . 6/9/2019 Trip insurance, always a good idea. Thanks for the hoot! |
| Queen Farli chapter 1 . 11/13/2018 I love that, short but amusing. Queen Farli |
| moops chapter 1 . 11/13/2018 lol last line was great |
| rubyred753 chapter 1 . 10/29/2018 ALWAYS get insurance! Ha-ha, loved this little gem! |
| red-jacobson chapter 1 . 10/16/2018 I can't believe I didn't review this before! Or maybe I left a review over on Ficwad back when that was still a usable website. Anyway, I'm in awe of your ability to write comedy and really enjoyed this one-shot Red |
| guest chapter 1 . 9/10/2018 Lol! Wonder where do you get your ideas from but this is awesome! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/30/2018 LOVE THIS LOVE THIS LOVE THIS LOVE THIS *and* LOVE THIS! **Especially as my own car/house insurance agent rep. has just been EXTRAORDINARILY helpful to me not 15 minutes ago! |
| Akamarackus chapter 1 . 7/12/2018 hah. haha. hahaha. this is great. |
| dhamann7878 chapter 1 . 6/27/2018 I really really love your sense of humor. Just dark enough to cause an outbreak of smiles and giggles. |
