Woah.. Riku and Cloud huh

I had never even thought of this pairing before, but it seems it works out. I like how you did this, like an explanation for the pairing. And if you want to stay canon, if Sora is with Kairi, Riku really needs someone for himself (and it is /not/ going to be King Mickey...). I can definitely see him with Cloud after your bits about their relationship. I was hesitant at first, but now I am quite fond of them. (This review is kind of foreshadowing what I wanted to say for one of your later fics, so please excuse any repetition when I get to it :P) So, back to this particular fic, excellent explanation. Well played.

I like the contrast between Riku and Cloud. The comparison of their postures, and everything... It just works.

Clever - the mirroring thoughts are nicely crafted. You conveyed much in a concise, descriptive manner. Nice read.

Its good, short...but good. :3

Is this yaoi or a friendship fic?

I really like the way these two pieces mirror each other. The style is very nice and the characters are portrayed well.