Oh my gosh my feels. You shattered them and then put everything broken back together so sweetly... and I love it! Beautiful job.
-Yume

Hmm.. Reminds me of a fic I read once, and the fact that it made me want to write a story with a kind of similar theme... But! I'm definitely not thinking about new ideas while I still have so much to write! Argh! But it's so hard to do sometimes..! -sobs- ... Well anyways, good job on your fic at least.

Aww. That was cute yet disturbing. A ten year old and (if lavi and Allen still have that age difference) a thirteen year old kissing on the play ground. But hey! LAVEN FOR LIFE!

LAVI AS A STUFFED RABBIT?!HAHAHA-Oh makes sense.

Enjoyed reading this~ :)

wow this is amazing

did you ever consider continuing this or making a sequel?

that was adorable! awwwww~ wait...wat did Allen do with the bunnie after that? owo

I don't know what to say. It's short but so dense..

I loved it, and I would cry a bit for the emotion if I wasn't ashamed in this way..XD

THat was perfect. Congratulations ç_ç

Simply... beautiful... *sniffs and cries* Such a wonderful story and a really beautiful ending for a DGM fanfic(Although its only one chapter). I agree with the other reviews there aren't so much reincarnation fics in DGM. This one is really unique!

Gah! I remember my old teddy bear, I want him back! *cries even more*

Truly a beautiful piece of work *sniffs*

Thank you for writing it~

Gambatte~ne!

-blueporing90

AW it is funny with kanda

i think this fanfic is amazing! i love! i can't stop reading it over and over!...sorry..its just so good and well written! XD

Very well done! I like it a lot!

oh man thats so cute~ it reminds me of when i was little and we played lava monster at school and jumped back and forth from the ends of the firetruck thing with the monster underneath. Reminds me of bethany too who i most surely screwed up for life even though we were 6. yeah, good times.

OMG IT'S SO AWESOME! i almost cried..*SNIFFLES* *huggles lavi-bunny* i loved this. i am SO faving! what a wonderful story..*sniffles more* aha, and Kanda! the reincarnation stories are quite popular (well not so much for DGM) but in general, but you totally pulled off a unique, one of a kind reincarnation fic!

Cute! I loved this. I really wish that you would write Allen meeting up with all of the others that came back. I really want to know more about the world that you are creating. Please tell us more you leave too much unanswered, please!