In Chapter 19, you forgot to add paragraphs.

great story! i really enjoyed it! ]

it was a good story, i loved harry he was hilarious

Okay, you want my opinion... THAT WAS BLOODY AWFUL! (and no, I'm not British, I just like the word) Sorry, I correct myself, it was very very bad, but not horrible enough for me to stop reading. In fact it made me WANT to read it because it was so random and badly written that it was just SO FUNNY.

I'm sorry about this, I'm normally very positive in reviews and if I have nothing good to say, I don't say it, but this story just begged a review. Truth is, I've read worse stories than this one, I just gave up on them before the end. This is the first bad story longer than two chapters that i've actually completed.

It was very amusing though, I'll give you that. I couldn't stop laughing and I talked about it nonstop for three days. Also, I really really like the banter between Harry and Sirius and Harry and James (have I mentioned that before I even read the story, just from the summary, I knew the new teacher was James). You're really good at that. Because of this one redeeming quality I'm gonna give you another chance. I'm going to read the rest of your stories and see what they're like. I may like them.

P.S. Just for future reference: it's spelled "straight" not "strait." And I think you spelled Sinistra wrong. That's the only spelling/grammar errors I can think of off the top of my head.

P.P.S. You should change the status from "in-progress" to "complete"

Best Luck in your future stories,

restinpace

Nice story and an interesting pairing.

OMG! i luvved this story! it was really really good, the ending kind of left u hanging which i kinda didnt like but the overall story was awesome! BRAVO!

aw...so sad...but that was a really good story. although i wouldve liked a more dramatic reaction when harry was found out to be alive by hermione and the rest.

I like it bunches. If only other stories were so zany. l8er

tyg

Super cool story but I lack the time to make it to the last chapter you have posted and give it the justice it deserves. I'll review after I've read it, hopefully not a repeat of two in the morning.

l8er

Wow, just had to come back to this story, having read the summary so many times(though not recently until today, meaning not in a couple of years). Amazingly written, words can't begin...I can't begin to describe how much I like this story, and how glad(relieved) I am that you actually have made a sequel to this, loved the jokes and that one chapter(the last one I mean), the dialogue between James and Harry(and Sirius) when Hermione was there was hilarious. I really like this Harry(kind of reminds me of the confident Harry in kris rl's fanfic, but then again totally different,..I just love it...and can't wait to read the sequel, which I am going off to do right now(and yes, I read this whole story(in less than 7 hours, or something like that, started yesterday, done this morning, took a four hour break for TV and stuff. Yeah anyways...off to read the sequel.(or maybe I'll sleep then read, but I hope that Harry and James relationship improves and well I'll just read the sequel then, if I haven't mentioned it already you write very well!

first of all the ending was in my opinion a little suicidal.

secondly, i love the story and the only reason i'm not begging for a sequel is because you asked me not to.

"Are you mad? Now is not the time to swap charms!"

Angsty chapter, but the ending was funny as hell

Great!

very good

This story was amazing.I loved 're a great writer and I'm off to read more of your stories/