Oh, this is cool. Misora’s stuck in a train station on the way to the afterlife, waiting until she figures out whatever it is she needs to figure out. It feels to me like she needs to realize what she truly wanted out of life. And then L appeared, because he was dead, and because he could help. This is such a great afterlife fic. I almost want to write a continuation of this fic, of Misora and L on the train. I just don’t want it to be over.

nicee(: there's something about your style that portrays the melancholy well.. and i love the story development (:

Loved it :)

AGERGILEAHF. This. Is beautiful. Nice style of writing, good descriptions, L and Naomi and L and Naomi. So very lovely, I love the train that's not coming and Naomi's alone and her fiancee isn't there (which, I'm not sure if you knew this or not, but it makes sense if you think that since Raye inadvertently used the Death Note, he can't 'move on', I read somewhere). The interaction between L and Naomi takes the cake. Thanks for writing this, I'm faving!

Stunning, so wonderfully stunning. It's not often I come across a fic like this. Beautifully conceived and written. Keep up the insightful work.

Good job! *pats head*

But Naomi did meet L once before, though she didn't realize it. And she would have known him anyway, because she had seen Beyond Birthday before too.

This story is cute, but I'm sad you wrote them dead.

Absolutely beautiful. I actually teared up a bit. While your lemons and limes are incredibly fun to read, this, too, was enjoyable... but in a more spiritual way, if you'll forgive the triteness of saying so.

Please keep up the good work!

I cried. You win!

My god...this was a beautiful story. The imagery was perfect, your message was understood without you having to come out and say it, and this is my favorite Death Note pairing. The effect that it gave off honestly gave me chills. Just...wow.

Interesting idea and great story.

That was really, really, really good! I loved it!

wow...this is really good. It's really deep! Wow...I really like this. It's very creative. Thank you! xD

will u keep it up? will you? *.*

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Wow. You're an amazing writer. And the effect is spectacular. I love your depictions-AH. This is just wonderful.

Oh my God, this is so romantic, and dramatic! I simply love it, beautiful!