Oh...so the chapters got switched...no wonder I felt so odd since suddenly they were at the hospital and all that.

Please please please don't tell me Hikari is falling for Daisuke...I so don't support Daikari.

Heh, now I know how to chop onions w/o crying! Thanks, Mimi!

It TOOK ME FOREVER TO, But don't worry I really liked it. The end was a bit confusing to me, and in the end I was literally jumping up and down at those two talking... I don't really like the ending, but I guess it's up to our imaginations.

It was great! Keep on writing.

HI! I have been reading this fic for about four days and I finally finished it all! (JUMPS UP AND DOWN) I have to say, this is the best Koumi I've read. I usally am reading two or three fics at a time but I was so hooked on this one that I couldn't tear myself from it. I just want to say that I enjoyed reading your fic and I would LOVE to read any others that you might have. (I LOVE KOUMI FICS!)

. I finally finished this fic! It took me a while but, it was worth it! That was REALLY good! You're a good writer! I like the way you kept every singe character IC and didn't make some of the perticular characters that you disliked (if you even dislike any of them... I couldn't tell.. o.O) OOC like some people do. .; if you know what I'm talking about! Also, the way that you made Koushiro's personaity is excatly how I always imagine him... being a HUGE Koushiro fan! .; I really was wanting to read a fic about his adoptive parents so badly and then... I found this! I was so happy! . I also perticularly liked the end with Koushi and his new baby sister.. so... adorable! I could just see that moment! Oh! well... I better stop blabing now, byesters!

~~Kitty~~

Wow...such a great fic, I'm not supposed to like this kind of stories, but I just couldn't stop reading 'till the end because of how good the story is. I thought the first impressions of Mimi and Izzy having a crush for each other (Mimi's friends teasing) were great, but the last chapters had even more spectaculars parts. I liked a lot the end, it was absolutely meaningful and it's a lesson everybody should learn. Of course, me being a Koumi fan, I would have preferred Mimi and Izzy as a couple at the end, or at least that Izzy would have told her how he felt, maybe that's why I don't like SO much the sequel. I DO like the sequel of this story tough, but it is based on the epilogue of 02, and I didn't like the end of Zero Two, I think they should had left them as teenagers, and leave their future to our imaginations, I even think they should make an alternative dimension where they could put another adventure for them, and leave any inter-digidestined couples possible.

Well, I got off the point, very good fic, hope you keep writing, and well, who knows, maybe you will write another koumi sometime, and well, if you don't, that won't stop me from reading your fics, because they are really good. (By the way, sorry for the grammar, I'm a mexican, so obviusly, English is not my original language).

Hi, I'm just reviewing to say that I truly enjoyed this story; it's not often that you happen upon a story that reflects human interaction so honestly. Just the fact that this story doesn't end with Koushirou hooking up with Mimi exemplifies this fact. I just want to say thank you, and that I hope you keep writing wonderfully original stories such as this one.

First off, my sincerest apologies for not reviewing your story earlier. That being said, on to my review.

Personally, I've tried to write in TV script style before as well (my Slayers story) and while it can work I am honestly of the opinion that regular novel style works best for writing. I find it's just better akll around for expressing certain emotions and describing scenes better.

That being said, I think that's the only negative thing I have to say about your story here. Mimi comes across as the compassionate individual that I feel she truly is, despite the naysayers. Izzy is, for lack of a better description, emotionally clumsy. Something I am familiar with from my younger days, having grown up as a geek/nerd/weirdo in school myself. So I felt a connection to him in this story that I haven't felt in other stories to the main male lead. This is truly an enjoyable story, and it's going on my favorites list.

My own perception of how the story itself wraps up is that Izzy's fooling himself if he thinks he's "lost" Mimi. In fact, nothing could be farther from the truth. One battle, in the war that is love, means little in the long run, and Izzy has proven that he will be there for Mimi in the long run. Ultimately, you have to be someone's friend before you can be anything more, and indeed the strongest, most romantic and loving relationships spring from the best of friendships (I speak from personal experience there, my wife and I were, and still are, the closest of friends before anything else.) Yamato seems to have skipped a step or two with Mimi, whereas Izzy is right where he needs to be.

Of course, in the final analysis it's your story. I'm merely sharing what my perspective is on how it ends and where things might lead if your timeline were fast forwarded a few years.

So kudos to you for a good, solid fic. I look forward to whatever sequel or spinoff stories you plan to take from here.

Wow! What a great ending! I REALLY like it! I haven't been able to read it sooner coz I've been busy and will continue to so sorry if I can't read your wonderful fics much more(I'm having your probalem of not being able to too much leisure activity this summer). Great job on a great fic!

gah, gomen for not reviewing the last two chapters v_v; I've been really busy since school got out? heheheh _;;; I know these aren't good excuses, but that only proves how lazy I am _;; so anyway, bravo on writing one of the few non-yaoi fanfics I've ever enjoyed

Bingo! Bingo! Bingo-bingo-bingo! LOL! That was great stuff! Your handling of the Digimon character was wonderfully done, especially Tentomon with his little out-bursts, and not forgetting Harkmon’s non-sober state LOL! It was really informative and enjoyable and I’m really glad that you made this section, I learnt such a lot from it. I think that you should consider adding a section like this on all your future fics, it certainly cleared up quite a few points for me. It was a pleasure to review and I’m looking forward to r&r the sequel! _

Ah, nice one! I loved it! You really captured the characters in a great way, especially Miyako and Jyou, their scenes were the best. You should really consider doing a short comedy fic featuring those two seeing how well you can handle them. The interaction between Mimi and Koushirou was also nicely done, especially their hidden feelings for one another. Other parts I enjoyed, the scene with Koushirou’s new sibling. It was a very touching moment when Koushirou named his new sister after his biological mother, although I had a feeling that he would’ve named the baby after his mom. I’m also kind of sad that this marvellous story is over but glad that you’re considering on doing a sequel. Well, thanks again for keeping me updated on it’s progress and good luck with the sequel!

This story was excellent!