Omfgg litterally i just finished this at 2 im the morning im just sitting here so upset crying over my poor little babies , im pretty sure this is the best XigDem fic on this site, i love your writting style , the last chapter was so amazing ,the whole thing from the start to finish was amazing, good job 15/10 would reccomend this fic to a friend c,:

I have a few questions regarding your characterization and "purple prose".

I'm not flaming and HAVE read this story more than once. I am not that little bugger who spammed you, either.

ANYWAY...
1. Xigbar is a tad bit OOC. He speaks kind of like Xemnas would (a.k.a all eloquent and purple-y). Which makes me wonder if they traded names in this fic?
2. If Xigbar doesn't care about race, then WHY IS HE A FUCKING NAZI?
3. Do you think dictators would pick free-thinkers to do their bidding? Ha! No. They need people who blindly follow orders and actually BELIEVE what he says.

One pointer on your style. Try toning it down with your descriptiveness. Seriously, is Xemnas the one narrating or is it just me? Most of the lengthy paragraphs bored me to sleep. To be frank (pfft! Anne Frank?), I just skipped over the boring words and went straight for the action.

If you really think I'm flaming, go ahead. I'm just pointing out a few things that annoyed me.

I like your fic, and with a few characterization and plot modifications, it could be really great.

Those paragraphs at the begining of this chapter were awsome (the part about you not caring what people thoght of you) you should become a poet (when your done with the fanfiction of course) it was extremly motivating. :)

god damn you for writing so good. only fan fic that made me cry. Keep writing your wonderful! now ill go and wipe my tears, haha

The inaccuracies hurt my braaaaaaaaaiiiin...

History books are your friends. Look at one or two after rereading your fic, and share my pain. That is all.

Cheers,

~GameSpazzer

History books are your friends. Look at one or two after rereading your fic (or, really, just the first chapter will do), and share my pain. That is all.

Cheers,

~GameSpazzer

Yes another review. First, thank you for giving me something to do this morning. I- I'm trying to gather my thought on your story together right now, so this may be a little jumbled. And full of spelling errors, as it was typed on my phone.

I liked it. I can't believe I liked it. What you said in the first chapter, how it was one of the best; that's true. I finished the whole thing in one sitting. It gave me time to think about the whole WWII senario and I came to the concultion that if my favorite show was South Park, a show with a nine year old wanna be Hitler like Eric Cartmen, I could and should give this a chance. I'm really glad I did. This is a fantastic XigDem, it's- it's good. While I could never fav it out of fear that a someone might see (resulting in me having to try and defend this piece) it's definatly one of my favs. I'm glad to have tried something new and for it to have had such lovely results. I found myself completely engaged with the story, almost yelling at the screen, in hopes that everything would turn out right if I did. Thanks for writing this. It's made me think a lot.

I... I caved. Like you said in your summary, there really isn't much good XigDem out there, and you had such good reviews, so I'm giving in and reading this. So far, I'm kinda happy I did.

Aww... I loved every second of it... Well, except for the part where Demyx died... And when Xigbar was denying his love... But either way it was amazing.

I loved your characters, I really did, you didn't have to, but you gave each a story. And because of that your story was that much more meaningful. This was the first XigDem I have read, and I think I couldn't have started with a better one, i adored the pain, and drama, and how you kept a careful balance between angst and happiness. It was beautiful, and I loved every second.

Again, wonderful, beautiful, glorious, and other such adjectives. Thank you for writing this. Really.

-Angry face-

(I like the story though)

I love this story. I's only my second time reading it, but the first time nearly brought me to tears. Why did Demyx have to die? What did he do wrong?

This made me cry so much. Thank you for writing such a beautiful story.

O

MY

GOD.

I've been trying to find this story back since FOREVER! You really have no idea how happy I am to find this one back!

I loved this story so damn much back when I didn't have a account yet and forgot the name... I felt SOOOOOO bad that I didn't remember and I wanted to reread the story so badly..

I loved the story 3

aww it touched my heart at the ending. i loved the story. but why did you have to make my favorite character die? hint fav character is demyx.

Thank you so much for submitting this piece of literary art.

The story was wonderful, the emotions and actions were amazing.

I cried;;;; ;3; Thank you.