Arruinado...nunca entenderé porque el autor hace que revele a otro que es del futuro ( y si lo hizo 1 vez, lo hará de nuevo).

En fin, fue bueno mientras duro. Pero este capítulo será en donde muchos dejarán de leer( el autor puede tomarlo mal o no, pero lo digo porque en lo personal la escritura estuvo muy bien, solo este problema lo cambia todo).

:(

I like this story. Well written. Good plot. Buuuuuut I just don't like the ending where he married Luna. But I understand that this is your story so you get to decide what happened so it's OK.

And this is where I stop reading. It was going so good to.

Your Harry is so fucked up in the head with hero worshipping asshole Snape that he gets fucken mind rape to the point of bleeding out from everywhere and he fucken thanks him for it.

So they know Quirrell is trying to kill him but won’t do anything about. Just keep an eye on him.

They are to busy watching Harry cuz they can’t read him mind (jerks). I don’t even know why Harry gives a shit about Snape. How can he just forget that he was the reason Voldemort went after them in the first place. Snape WAS an ass to him. Yes he help in the war but so did a lot of ppl and he’s painting Snape as the main true hero (oh please)

Don’t get me wrong I like Snape overall but now above others that fought the good fight.

Thanks for a very well done story . I enjoyed it very much. I hope you write many more.

Wasn't Harry furious with Dumbledore of prior timeline for withholding information, especially from himself and Snape? And regarding very similar topics. Monstrous or necessary?

Great story

what happened with draco

I swear to god I would beat the shit out of that man as soon as I could for doing that shit, I'm so mad. Harry should have given him a good hexing, he is 30 something years old, not some push over teenager. Good story but damn I am pissed.

great ff so far i hope harry doesnt get sorted into griffindor(idaelly it would be slytherin).

This is the third time I’ve read this doc , love it .

I am rereading that for the xth time and still like it, but one thing is starting to get on my nerves. Why is everyone talking softly all the time? And since they all do it, why even mention it?
If i had to guess i would place softly in the top 10 of your favorite words.

Congratulations, you have possibly the worst summary I have ever seen on this site.

Loved it and I'm glad he married Luna instead of Ginny

Is James not related to the Black's in this story? what about the Weasley, Lupin and Longbottom's family in cannon there related to Black's so Stock sud know he is related to Harry and Harry sud know it too? or is this one of them artistic licence thingys lol. (not criticising or being rude just wondering lol)