Sam is prone to abandon his family, soooo

I love love love this story! So good!

Ok. Apparently I now have an absurd love of Dean dealing with psycho exes who go after his little brother. Cool. Perfectly normal. Nothing to be concerned about.

Seriously though. Great story. Had me hooked on every word.

Wow

this story was so good!

This was awesome. Thanks so much for this well written story. I love to read about the young Winchesters.

What a very well thought out story you've given us, and all of it using one single sentence uttered by Dean under stress. I really enjoyed the villan (people are CRAZY) and you did such a great job with the recovery process. You also did a great job with John's protective overbearing nature, props on working in how he pissed off Singer!

Great story. I really liked it :)

That was good.

Is it just me, or when Dean said "Rose, no!" it reminded me of the voice of the Ninth Doctor?

Amazing story. It shows how interesting you were able to keep it, that Sam is found halfway through, and yet you kept me eagerly jumping to the next chapter. The, was it "psychotic gerbil" ? line about Dean's little paranoid moment when Sam took too long showering, that line was hilarious. And poor Sam. Thanks for taking time to fix him after Rose messed him up, loved how Dean's presence stabilized him.

Wow! Let me just say that this story blew me away.
I recently realized that I like your writing enough to try some genres that I don't usually read. I find that a lot of writers write teenaged Sam as if he was somewhere between 5 and 10 years old. They write teenaged Dean is if he was 30. And John... well, he is usually either a super mean, tough assed jerk all of the time, Or, he is sickeningly sweat and dripping with constant love and affection. Your Sam and Dean teenChesters (sp? sorry, I am new to all this) are spot on. And you write John as the complex conflicted father that I have always pictured him to be.
I have always been a fan of long multi-chapter stories that are well written. And yours, are amazing! This one kept my interest and the story flowed perfectly.

thank you so much for the hours of entertainment that I am getting by reading your stories.

Really enjoying this. Nice pacing with the suspense - not giving away too much too soon, and she's not going over-violent... at least not yet!

Ugh! I was supposed to be asleep hours ago! I'm going on vacation tomorrow and I have to get up at 5:00 a.m. its all your fault. This story was amazing! Well done! :D follow me on instagram! WinchesterBrotherz

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