| Reviews for For Thine Is The Power |
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Alexis Kameru chapter 7 . 12/18/2019 PLEASE tell me there will be more to this story? This story is Amazing! 3 |
Learoxel chapter 7 . 6/19/2019 I'm confused did I miss something or is it foreshadowing.. what's going to happen to Severus at Halloween? |
Caramel4me chapter 7 . 6/17/2019 I have LOVED this. Your writing is beautiful and your characters are full. Thank you, I only wish I could read the rest of the story! Never feel like you can’t come back to this story! I’ll be here! |
kryptonianhallows chapter 7 . 5/30/2019 This is such a good story what happened? |
Crag1991 chapter 7 . 4/4/2019 Almost 11 years, and still a good story. Thank you for writing it. As for powers, I would just stick with "parseltongue" and "metamorphmagus". Maybe stronger wandless magic, but nothing too crazy (able to breath fire or somehow having veela allure). For his unlocked potential, just make Harry smarter the Hermione. He is related to one of the smartest witches of her generation. And maybe a better memory recall, or just have it perfect recall. That could be fun to use (with all that angst he's got). Would've liked to see what Harry would have looked like, and what everyone's reaction would be to see the "new" just kinda standing there. And the whole wizarding worlds reaction when they find out that there "Savior" is related to 9 Deatheaters. And how Draco takes it lol. Even though it's been awhile, keep up the good work! |
a pair of ragged claws chapter 7 . 2/28/2019 This is an amazing story, and I want to know what is going to happen with so many plot threads! I know it’s been over 10 years, but it would be so awesome if you could come back and finish this or even update! Or, like another reviewer said, put it up for adoption and let someone else finish it...although I really, really want to know what YOU were going to write. Please come back! |
L chapter 1 . 10/5/2018 You did an awesome job there, mate! It looks awesome! |
s chapter 5 . 9/6/2018 My goodness, why would someone be mad at you? Ignore those people; you're life is more important than anything. If they can't understand that or don't care, well, nuts to them. You rock. You're an excellent writer. ty |
Kaliko Jerika chapter 7 . 7/14/2018 This is a great fic, but I find that people call Harry far too often. Pomfrey would call all her patients by their first name, and Hermione would never call Harry, Potter. |
SlytherinChick7 chapter 7 . 6/21/2018 Please complete this fix or put it up for adoption. I would be happy to take it on if you need me too. I’m really enjoying this fic and would love to see more. Thanks. |
scorbus shipper chapter 1 . 2/12/2018 This is so heartbreaking and I feel like crying good writing I never seen such as I saw teacher have me feel such emotions exllent writing |
Mystic Sharman chapter 1 . 1/20/2018 Because of its first rule the severitus challenge is utter blasphemy. However that doesn't mean that Snape cannot ever be redeemed or adopt Harry during the couse of the fanfic, but Harry must always be a Potter/Peverell by blood preferably by being the son of James Potter/Peverell. |
Guest chapter 6 . 1/15/2018 I found a part of this chapter that i believe has a typo in it. "'Oh,' she responded, startled, then started laughing himself". I believe you meant to say "herself" but I could just be confused after this ch. Thanks for the amazing fiction thus far. -сталин |
panther73110 chapter 7 . 1/2/2018 Awesome story, Sorry that see that it was never finished. |
Carlyn858 chapter 7 . 11/22/2017 Wow... Stunning. I loved this! So much perfect detail and characterisation, I loved every mi site. However, I know it is pointless to ask for an update... It's been almost 10. Whole. Years. Wow. But thank you for such and enjoyable read. |