Best chapter yet! Incubus is, hands down, the best fan fiction that I have ever read. It's sexy, funny, action-packed, and romantic. Normally I don't like OMCs, but I fell in love with Sasha right away.

I'm so glad you wrote this story. It's great to finally find a FF story where I don't want to stop reading a few chapters in because the characters become boring or OOC. This is very well written.

So, is Sasha the incubus? Bit predictable, if it is.

By the way, it's a 'chupacabra' not a 'chapacubra'.

one of the best stories ive ever read. Incredible. Im usually a Cas/Dean girl, so throwing in an OC was new territory for me, and you had me hooked from the first chapter. The sex squad was awesome, too, but Dean and Sasha's romance is the stuff of legends.

THE FLASH'S NAME IS BARRY ALLEN! NOT WALLY WEST! WALLY IS THE SON OF JOE WEST, THE MAN WHO TOOK BARRY IN WHEN HIS MOM WAS MURDERED AND HIS DAD WENT TO PRISON! WALLY IS KID FLASH, AND DOESNT EVEN BECOME A SPEEDSTER UNTIL HALFWAY THROUGH THE COMICS! Okay, sorry, had to get that out. I am very much a geek, and have read all of the Flash comics and am caught up with the TV show. This story is awesome, and this is the only real mistake that I've found so far. I also love how long it is, I'll probably still not be done with this a month from now. Keep on writing, you have a natural affinity for it. From what I can tell anyway. Who listens to a 13 year old kid, though?

I wish they hadn't been so moral in the beginning, Sam and Dean now probably would've killed Gordon and Kubrick no problem.

u know how most Harry Potter fans hated umbridge more then voldemort? that's how I feel about Gordon, he's spns umbridge.

Sam, eight pounds at six months? You don’t have children do you? More like 16/18, I mean, come On!

OMG, I loved this so much! This has to be the best fic I have ever read. I was a little hesitant at first, because it is soo long, but it just kept getting more interesting. And Sasha! I love him so much, I now wish he was on the show.

I am crying so har right now T.T (love this story so much) -9nine9

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I very much admire you as a writer. Your writing style is fluid and much of what I've strived to have in my own writing.

The original hunts were very interesting. Plot twists are best when one can look back and realize the signs were there for anyone to see, but didn't quite register on the radar.

I found Dean's struggle with fear very compelling. I love characters that have serious problems, but don't let those problems get in the way of living their life and doing what they love. Dean is a prime example of this. I also found in interesting that it seemed for some of the story that Sam was intended to be the leader, but in the end it was Dean all along.

Sasha is such a great character. Often I have a difficult time with original characters inserted into other works, but he was dynamic and sweet and interesting. He was well matched with Dean’s character.

In the last chapters, where characters tell Dean he or she trusts him to make the right decision, what he or she actually means is that he or she trusts Dean to make the choice he or she thinks Dean should make. Not for Dean to make the purported right choice. You did exactly what I would have done when you thwarted that and had Dean make the unusual right choice.

I bought the first Incubus ebook, and I look forward to reading it! Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to read.

Holy f**knuts FIFTY DOLLARS ON JEANS? dean, the best pair of jeans i've ever owned lasted me three years of regular wear and tear and i only paid $20, where on earth are you buying your jeans from, darling

Can you make one where Sasha tops,please?

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