This is so good. Just the right blend of confusion and emotion and pauses and just, wow, I really love this.

Words cannot express my love for this piece.

I adore this. It's murky and dark and deceptive and confusing and unclear and witty and surprising and emotional and sad and happy and completely, absolutely amazing.

This was awesomely awesome! I can tell you're a brilliant writer and really care about your work. (Artemis, too... ;) ha ha.) However... eh? Bloody hell, I'm so confused! XD But seriously... what happened in there?

~Sarah May xxx

Wow... that was really unique. A little confusing at first, but it all made sense in the end. Great job!

A little confusing, but I liked it. It was different (no AxH or AxM) but in a good way. I liked the way you portrayed Cue and Artemis, and their struggle. Good job!