This story's going under my favourites! I really liked your perspective, but poor Lillith, eh? At least she got some exercise...

I'd pretty much kill to be in Lillith's place. But not really.

Much love!

Aha! Presented him with two black sticks! I'm sure that would be very helpful.

Thanks for the mention love! But you must agree one must be reminded of ones failures lest one forgets the one who was younger and more foolish and the one who remembers must jog the memory of the one who has tried to forget, for the one...

Um yeah.

Well at least there was no blind woman!

BLIND WOMAN: Why are you so angry? Let me feel your face!

RAPHAEL: *sob*

BLIND WOMAN: *doesn't notice Raphael's face is all squishy*

RAPHAEL: *slowly rebuilds his shattered trust in the human race*

BLIND WOMAN: *is not prejudiced against mutants*

BOTH: *hook up* * a lot*

YAY!

Now you can be reminded forever in this review!

But that's why you love me.

:)

Love Me

I agree. It should be labeled as humor. I was LOL at Lillith the whole time. I think you did a great job on this and I wish it could have been in the movie.

Not too bad, but I think this should have been labelled as humor as well.