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SigningSiren chapter 11 . 4/5/2018 This was a really interesting concept. I’ve seen a lot of Obi-Wan going back in time, but never forward like this. I wonder what else you had planned. The visions leading to Anakin being born free seem like they would prevent a lot of potential problems. Though it is an interesting twist that Shmi will be involved in his life. Also, introducing a more established friendship between Padmé, Sabé, Obi, Anakin and Bant is interesting. I rather like where that is going |
Haru Maru Stark Salvatore chapter 11 . 11/14/2016 Ahhhh this story i awesome come back and continue :-) congrats for excellent work:-) |
Rascal chapter 11 . 7/20/2016 THAT WAS AMAZING! I absolutely loved this fanfic! I screamed and put my head point the table when I realized I finished the last chapter and it hadn't been updated since 2010. If there is any chance that you could finish this story I would love you forever. This is one of the best fanfics I have ever read! And that's saying something cause I read a lot of fanfic. Please update if you still have the account and remember the story line! |
Guest chapter 11 . 2/4/2016 This is a really fascinating story! I see that it's been a few years (hah, 5). If you are ever able to post again to this story, please do! |
Guest chapter 11 . 7/30/2015 You should have finished it. It was really good |
Hi I'm Bob chapter 11 . 9/13/2014 You are an amazing writer, CalaisKenobi. Don't waste your talent- write an update (5-6 Chaps?) and make sure you include the part about Anakin finding out about being Ben's master and their first day as Master and Padawan. I'm a theoretical physicist/novelist hopeful and I specialize in science fiction. I can help- just tell me what I need to do. TTYL, Bob |
Unnamed Stranger chapter 11 . 9/5/2014 Very good. I 3 timetravel fics, but I'd appreciate it if you'd update in the next month. |
Toaofwriting chapter 11 . 5/5/2014 Seems like a great story. Looking forward to the rest of it! |
Starhunter79 chapter 11 . 2/25/2013 Wow, great story. I'm enjoying the interaction between all the characters, especially both Obi Wan's and Anakin. But didn't the older Obi Wan recognize his lightsaber and what happened to said lightsaber after the duel with Dooku. Loved that Anakin didn't lose his arm, I think it will help him in the end. Having a robotic/droid arm, I think helped dehumanize him and made Anakin try to hold on to the people and possessions he still had with an iron grip. The loss of his arm and his mother made him fearful and caused him to try to get enough power to control everything. So he might not make the mistakes he did because he is changed. I love all the mysteries and/or questions; what did/does the council know about Obi Wan being sent to the future, what is the significance of everyone gathering and how will it affect the future, does taking Anakin as a baby to the temple change anything? Why should it matter if baby Anakin has attachments, isn't going to grow up like a normal Jedi? Why does he need an exception? What does the original Anakin need to learn from young Obi Wan and doesn't changing how Anakin gets to the temple change the original Anakin. Is Anakin accepted to the temple as a child? Where's Palpatine and how does he figure into all of this. Will young Obi Wan get back to his own time? And so many more questions I'm dying to find answers to. I know this hasn't been updated in a while but please, please finish this story but abandon it. (I don't want to beg, wait it's too late) Or should I say "You WANT to finish this story" (while moving my hand slightly, I hope this works I haven't used a force suggest in ages, lol.) But seriously, I would like to say thank you for your wonderful story. I can't wait to read the rest of it. |
Eastonia chapter 11 . 1/3/2013 You should really try to continue this. I know that it has been 2 years, but this story has too much potential to be left alone. Cheers, Eastonia |
CC-645 chapter 11 . 5/12/2012 Hello! This is awesome! Great Time Travel fic! Are you going to finish this? I'd love to see the complete story some day soon. CC-645 |
JediGaladriel chapter 11 . 4/29/2012 Oh please don't leave it like that! I want to find out what happens! Please update soon! |
JediGaladriel chapter 8 . 4/29/2012 LOL! Loved that last part! Typical Anakin wit! Love this so far! |
Sanna Black Slytherin chapter 11 . 3/28/2012 Well, a good idea indeed. On the plot, I mean. I like it. And Anakin's last comment. "Now, THAT was interesting." I was quite literally laying on the floor, trying to gain a semblance of control over my laughter. Which I failed with (and quite vastly so), mind you. So, I add this to my Watching List. Hopefully we shall see each other again. |
The Pearl Maiden chapter 11 . 6/2/2010 :) Nice! |