| Reviews for Heaven Forbid |
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   Fire and Ice 01 chapter 25 . 8/2/2018 I love this story. Poor Ponyboy, poor everybody. I loved that Johmny practically moved in with yhem, that was cool. Dally, gone for 11 years, sad, though it could be a lot worse. If you ever want to write something about when he gets out and everybody like talking to him then, that would be amazing and I would definitly read. Again awesome story and amazing writing. |
| fletchley chapter 25 . 4/6/2018 this was more realistic than other Outsider fics - golly Dally being jailed for eleven years makes me sad, but it only adds to the story's appeal. I love it when fics are thought-out as much as this, and it really made me think. kinda sad I'm finished with reading it. |
| Guest chapter 25 . 3/28/2018 Have you thought about doing an eplogue for this story? Say 10 years down the track. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/23/2017 That was the worst thing I've ever read you sick bitch |
| potatokarate chapter 10 . 8/14/2017 I read this chapter right after playing a game of B.S. with all of my friends. |
| X chapter 25 . 2/20/2017 I feel that just one comment isnt enough to expres how much I love this fic. Its so beautiful written, and now I have to explain to my mum why i'm sobbing in my bedroom with ice-cream at 2 am on a school night.. |
| Elliesamanddeangirl chapter 7 . 7/19/2016 This is very moving, and you've got exactly how rape victims feel, dirty and not wanting to speak about it, and fear of men who are bigger and stronger, and that it's your fault somehow, and disgust and revulsion!It's like YOU know. |
| Zarak chapter 25 . 4/16/2016 :) good story |
| Guest chapter 25 . 1/26/2016 I loved this story it was great thank you |
| Guest chapter 25 . 12/19/2015 Read this in one day, it was a great story, having everyone become closer and how peaceful it was for awhile Glad dally didn't get the death sentence |
| arcadiac chapter 14 . 10/15/2015 I've been on a total roll since I've found this gem of a story. Reading nonstop. The cuddly, loving scenes between the brothers are what I LIVE for in Outsiders fanfics. I absolutely adored every moment of this chapter. Did Pony have sleep paralysis for a minute, there? You describe everything so well. It was the ending though that really warmed my heart. God, this story is an absolute pleasure and I am SO glad I found it. |
| BunnyluvsU chapter 1 . 3/4/2015 Woah |
| Meiwriter chapter 25 . 6/5/2014 This was awesome |
| Nessa Willow chapter 25 . 11/18/2013 Wow. That was beautifully written I'm not usually one for long stories but I couldn't stop reading this one. Great job on the whole thing with a perfect ending. Honestly, I'd like to see a one shot reunion after Dally gets out. :) |
| not-active.abandoned-account chapter 25 . 9/30/2013 That was one hell of a good story. Best Outsiders fic I've read so far! |
