This is like one of the best Naruto fics I've read! Like ssly, the way you laid the basis for their relationship, the gradual development it's so well written I'm in love with it. The second last chapter is my personal favourite! Thnx for writing this beautiful piece! Kudos ️

Omg this is so adorable uwu

I really enjoyed this story. I like how Naruto and Shikamaru ended up getting into a relationship, and I like how Shikamaru opens Naruto's eyes to the fact that he does have people who care about him and that he cares about Naruto very much.

I also like the end part where Naruto has Kakashi, Sai, Chouji, Kakashi, Ino, Sakura, and Shikamaru there by his side when he finally goes up against Sasuke. I like that he has that support there with him as he deals with Sasuke.

So yeah great story really enjoyed it.

Love reading this story it was amazing :)
I love your writing style how it flow so nicely with the story it was simple and easy to read.
But the ending tho I feel like you just left it on a cliff hanger and I can't help but wonder what happened at the end, dose Sasuke end up killing Naruto, dose Naruto end up killing Sasuke, dose Naruto end up saving Sasuke and bringing him back home? I hate that I will never know lol.
Anyway love this story to pieces it was beautiful :)
And loved how it was a Shikamaru and Naruto story.
Thanks for writing and sharing.

this was so good freaking good

I know this was written a while ago but I had a lot of fun reading it! Thanks for the story!

Normally not one for yoi, but this was very well written. However, you should probably change the rating to M instead of T...don't want you getting reported by an idiot later.

now that was good

Omg that was an awesome freaking story... I am at a loss. That was just awesome. Jeez I loved this story so freaking much.

Hmm.. it was actually quite well written.

Aw! Naruto and Shikamaru are so cute together! I love it! Great job! :)

-Yvonne

really well written and interesting story.

I absolutely loved this story! It all started with one teensy thing that turned into a beautiful relationship. I really like that it was kept short too, it was just a lot easier to deal with than having unnecessary drama.

Haha I loved this! It was an amazing fanfiction. Now in my top five naru/shika fanfics.

Liked it!