Ah
What happened?
No more story?

y...y...Y...QUE PASO? me encanto y no se que pasa, rayos quiero saber que pasa

Wish you would finish loved both stories!

I just randomly found this, and I'd like to read the ending :)

I really love this story. Please update soon.

Hi. I miss this story. I hope you update soon. i envision Gibbs heading back and barging his way in and kicking Sara and Ziva out so he can talk to Abby. Thanks

i've just sat and read 'abduction' and 'the return'...and i am now addicted...please, please, please (oh my goodness i never beg)finish this story...i love it...:) chauncey

UPDATE SOON!

this is an amazing story.

my two favorite shows and all my favorite ships!

this is interesting and funny. I like. keep going please

fun story, please continue!

Hi, since you told us that you will finish all your stories I hope I don't have to wait so long anymore. So please please - I want more.

Hi, I really enjoy your cross-over. which is rare because mostly they focused on one story more. I have the impression your are more in ncis but its so in the character that I love it.

please please please update!i really love this story

Hi,

I just read this in the last couple of days. It's a lot of fun. I don't watch NCIS, but now I think I might. Of course, I heard that there were some deaths in the finale. That can't be good. Thanks for writing and I look forward to more chapters.

Beh

Very cute! And Thanks for the Gabby storyline. I have been thinking for awhile now that CSI and NCIS should do a cross-over. Think that'll ever happen? :)