I enjoyed this! It was a fun read!

Now for my slight criticism:

The ending does leave a little to be desired and the previous final confrontation was wrapped up a little to quickly and cleanly in my opinion. Some more focus on the tolls it took on Oz, Xander, Faith, and Dawn with the morality of their decisions being questioned more by themselves and others could have added some good tension in the story. I think that having them toe that line of morality/sanity dilemma could have added that higher stress level that once things were done, as well as add some more lovecraftian tones to the story. Once the scobbies made it to the other side they could rationalize/ embrace the consequences and head home. That way, the taught reader could unwind and be satisfied more with the end of our peak into this universe. Just my thought on it.

I still enjoyed it and the characters. They all felt right and within their "scope" as characters grown up from the show. Great job there!

Doctoral thesis? Donut boy? Don't make me laugh!

Loved this story. Not so much the ending. A long gap from where they were and a grown son. How and why did they disapear? Did jesse find them? Did they get back? What happened while they were gone? Too many things left unsaid. Did enjoy it up til then. Just could have been more. You know?

Great story. Wish you haf expanded it a bit more though. Doesnt feel finished.

I thought it might be the episode Sight Unseen from SG1.

Driving? Helicopter? Why couldn't Buffy just use non-Euclidean physics like when she came through the ceiling and jaunt there?

Sam Carter, you go to other planets a couple times a month, but you have trouble with people falling out of the ceiling?

Loved the story. Hated the ending. Didn't connect to the story at all. Xander and Faith are missing and... Just wished for something to close the story not leave it open to further questions.

Excellent

Kinda like this ending better.

They're the Scoobies for real. Xander is a more effective Fred. Faith is more badass Daphne. Dawn could be considered Velma. And Oz is a combo of Shaggy and Scooby.

Huh, I'm surprised I didn't think of Oz when I was trying to figure out who Xander was hinting at.

Interesting way to deal with Patrice. I wonder what they're going to do about Cassie's end of the dislike.

*“Well we weren’t getting along so why force it, they need a new head slayer for the Middle East and you’re the weaker slayer between the two of us, so off you go.”*- With that one sentence, you redeemed Buffy to me.

Dawn and Oz, feels kind of weak.

Loved the story but ended weirdly. In the Call dawn was kidnapped and fought glory. Nothing in this one. In this one faith and xander are missing and have a child out of the blue? Wish you would finish the Call. Liked that one better.