this is my first read of your story and you have a few facts wrong
1. rin is Sout's age making her 12 Sesshomaru took rin in when she was 8/9 years old
2. Jaken is a Kappa (water imp)
3. Kagome's powers were sealed then released thanks to Sesshomaru defeating Magatsuhi
4. females of that time married at age 14
just to let you know this is my first read of your story and you got some facts wrong
5. How can InuYasha mate a clay pot the mark wouldn't hold, she could never give him children and she has a piece of KAGOME'S soul it is not now or ever was kikyou's

other than the facts it isn't a bad story written one sided, but then again I don't generally read first person stories a rule.

this is a very good story. it had a lot of action and conflict btwn kagome and kikyou. i'm glad it's in three parts. now, on to the second one. c'ya'

Absolutely wonderful story, I cant wait to read the sequel

YAAAAAAAAY Sesshomaru considers them pack

OMG THEY KISSED!? Yay

I teared up when Inuyasha got his gift from Souta, it was perfect

Awesome Inuyasha even agreed that this is Kagomes pack too. I love how they are laughing with her and praised her. I think Oka-san would have been the better choice even though Youbo is adopted mother, it just doesnt fit

YAAAY Kagome tell her this is you pack and you are the Alpha

Inuyasha is already wanting to know about the next holiday

I like this side of Sesshomaru. Kikyo needs to chill the f out

That's right Kagome you put her in her place

Uh oh the jewel re-shattered

Rin has joined them in the cave

Rin has joined them in the cave

Poor Souta and Kagome