| Reviews for Subject to Change: Fiore arc |
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Guest chapter 3 . 7/10/2013 Oh and PS your foreshadowing (going back to the first season as well) is the best. |
Guest chapter 2 . 7/10/2013 Sorry, this is kind of a spoiler review so don't read it if you don't want the story spilled! I'm just airing my thoughts a bit. "You are destined to die without him, and I believe he will join them if you are torn from him." Okay, Helios said this in the second chapter and it's something I picked up the second time reading this. Darien's supposed to go on this wild chase for their daughter in the future for the bad guys or something, right? So I'm assuming maybe Helios could sense their destinies and thus her being the princess but never totally picked up on it? I was so disappointed he never figured it out, it would have saved everybody a helluva lot of emotional turmoil, lol. |
Haibara chapter 3 . 5/28/2013 I am very, very much enjoying the "Subject to Change" series. Thank you, thank you, THANK YOU for all of your hard work, your passion for your stories and the SM series, and your understanding of and love for the characters. Looking forward to reading what happens next! |
LoveInTheBattleField chapter 3 . 7/14/2012 The story was great. |
Daydreamishly chapter 2 . 11/27/2011 "You'll get your very own possessive villain someday, I'm sure." Eight. Seriously. WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU. I'm simultaneously horrified and awed by your foreshadowing skills. I should mention that I have been rereading STC from the beginning. This isn't the first bit of foreshadowing, obviously (that Romeo and Juliet nonsense in the background in Season One was glorious), but this just made me choke on my cookie a bit. I'M TWENTY YEARS OLD, EIGHT, BUT I CAN'T EVEN SWALLOW A CHOCOLATE CHIP COOKIE PROPERLY WHEN YOU DO THIS TO ME. asdfldfkbg]pdkfg |
khannarie chapter 1 . 8/18/2011 hey id been wanting to read this but I need to find and read the first season first... I only found this and the second season. could someone point me where to find the first season pleasE? thanks |
stcfanwoo chapter 1 . 4/30/2011 rereading again :D |
Angelically Scarred chapter 1 . 4/14/2011 Great job. |
00j gd ett oo h fsjj g s d chapter 3 . 6/26/2010 This was a nice little bridge between seasons 1 and 2. I really like Helios and loved Lita's humour when they were riding on his back into outerspace. I can feel the progression of Dariens maturity through out the entire series, which is also well done. Great fic. |
myfavoriteperson chapter 1 . 5/28/2010 O just kidding! I just noticed the other part...STILL AWESOME. gonna go read it now.. :) |
myfavoriteperson chapter 3 . 5/28/2010 THIS IS AMAZING! I also just realized that this story was last updated in 2007 and I'm so sad. Your writing is possibly the best I've ever read on this site and I reaaallly hope you plan on publishing stuff in real life too. |
LightSinger chapter 3 . 4/9/2010 Sorry it's a late review, but I just love this series! Thanks so much for putting it up! |
Fiery Dancer chapter 3 . 2/9/2010 AWESOME! things actually make sense now, LOL - off to finish season 2 now ;D |
rakusa chapter 1 . 12/10/2009 I just came up with the best and most devious idea ever! You should make Seiko Venus' general, Kunzite's replacement. Diabolical, isn't it? I was just rereading STC1 and it just hit me, it would be PERFECT or in miss Lanai's words Parfait! |
Lexybug07 chapter 3 . 10/28/2009 amazing story i hope you finish it! |