| Reviews for During the Nineteen Years |
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   loogloo chapter 13 . 9/12/2008 good story i personally thought that you could tidy up your spelling an that neville should have got together with luna after what they were caught doing in the leaky cauldron. and also it was lavender that dumped ron so she wouldnt have wanted him back. an one more thing in britain they dont use dollars it is pounds. other than these small mistakes the story is exellant and i am lookin forward to further chapters. |
| zaz14 is potter mad chapter 1 . 6/28/2008 good story write more please |
| jjgluv chapter 1 . 5/27/2008 yeah what happened? it's been ages since you last updated! i'm missing this story! |
| portoricangirl chapter 13 . 5/7/2008 Wait! WAT HAPPENED? PLEASE, update ur story...i love wat ur writing. if im ur 90th review u WILL have 2 update...dont keep us waiting 2 long. and i will love to read more about dean and luna they make a great couple. oh,and one more thing ur story made it to my FAVORITE STORIES LIST. PS. 4give my english writing |
| crzylady chapter 1 . 4/20/2008 hello dear...I have to admit I was quite excited to start reading your story but was quickly turned off. You see, there are a few typos and when you describe the ring you state the diamond is settled between two EMERALDS which will match Ginny's hair. I think you mean Rubies (as described a few words before). Anyway, you may want to correct that. |
| joykaye chapter 13 . 3/19/2008 it was good. i really liked involveing r/h family. it was cute ad i hink you should add to it. |
| elfwarden chapter 13 . 3/18/2008 ah what a cliff. please update soon. please? *puppy eyes* great story Elfwarden |
| Istarbel chapter 13 . 3/17/2008 Hey this is is a fantastic story please dont stop it makes me quit happy. the dean luna part is my favorite. |
| wasu chapter 13 . 3/17/2008 hi I love it so please update very soon bye wasu |
| Cantletharrygo chapter 13 . 3/16/2008 I love it.. Please update soon I can't stand the supsense. J PS. I think that Dean & Luna shoudl have gotten together |
| jjgluv chapter 13 . 3/16/2008 WHAT? NO! I wanted more! why must you torment me so? but on with the review: I love this chapter a lot. I thought that the scene with harry and ginny was SO sweet. I also love how many scenes that you put into one chapter. in this chapter alone we had ron/hermione scenes, harry and teddy, ginny and harry, and plus the whole Burrow scene. I was so excited me you updated. I was cheering inside. Oh! and i think it would be really interesting to have dean/luna relationship. because i mean then you if you wanted luna to end up with neville or that other guy you could write about dean and luna's relationship going wrong. wow i've written a lot. hope you don't mind. love the story btw! |
| SleepyHead22 chapter 13 . 3/16/2008 Luna and Dean should DEFINITELY get together. Love the story, hate the cliffhanger. Update soon! |
| Danielle-R-Weasley chapter 13 . 3/16/2008 Hey Jess, another great chapter ;) keep up the good work! I also think there are a few reviews that could do with being told where to go, i'd love to see them write 13 chapters to the standard you write with such a great plot! Danielle x |
| Samantha08 chapter 13 . 3/15/2008 ahh! cliffhanger! noo! and yes Dean and Luna should defiantly get together! update soon |
| deathandallhisfriends chapter 13 . 3/15/2008 Great! please don't let ron and hermione break up or harry and ginny they are the greatest couples ever. I loved this chapter. it was funny but I'd like more romance involved in it. (I like reading romance.) but it was great please don't make me wait for the next chapter! ps: I think I'd like luna and neville instead of dean but maybe that's just me but great story ; post more asap! |
