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Frannercakes chapter 25 . 8/28/2016 Very much enjoyed the read. Recently decided to play through FF12 again and wanted to get in some reading as well. |
Pi-Kyu chapter 25 . 8/24/2015 Hello! I have just started reading this continue to update it! I haven't played the game for 3 years but I still love the characters deeply especially Balthier and Ashe pairing. I love how you write each couple, I can almost see every scene you wrote playing in my head. I look forward to the next time you update! |
Seraphaguin chapter 25 . 6/23/2015 I'm absolutely tickled that you're writing again. |
mangi-writes chapter 25 . 6/17/2015 I just wanted to say I really liked this story! I ship so many members of the party in so many different ways that having several present in a story like this is something I like! I enjoy the setup, how it's a different one for each location. So yeah! Really enjoyed what I've read so far and excited to read more! :) |
YellowShoes chapter 25 . 6/15/2015 Got Shards under my story alerts ever since. Thank you so much for updating! |
onlylogic chapter 24 . 6/3/2015 I still visit the FFXII section every now and then and it's nice to see something I read long ago getting an update! |
Giulio The Roman chapter 24 . 5/23/2015 You say nobody cares for the game or the story anymore. You shouldn’t make a statement so final. Because there is at least one person who cares. And even if I’m a stern supporter of Vaan/Ashe pairing, I appreciate so much your writing skills. If writing makes you happy, don’t give up. |
Bluebearsg chapter 24 . 5/10/2015 Yeah, it's a while since I've read a ffxii fanfic. This is such a nice drabble that I feel like I need to revisit the game again. :) |
0sunshine0 chapter 23 . 8/26/2010 aww! i loved this chapter! im not quite sure why i didnt review it sooner! i love how ashe was being all flirty with balthier and the only thing he was thinking of was her safety! that was cute! |
TJWasNotHere chapter 23 . 8/12/2010 Okay, so yeah, that one was adorable. :] Lovely little drabble-series. Can't wait to read the next Shard... (As for suggestions, I don't really have any off the top of my head, but I'll tell you if I do have any ideas.) ;] |
TJWasNotHere chapter 16 . 8/12/2010 I want to say AsheBasch - I think in the end they're kind of like, THE pair - but then again, AsheBalthier is so amusing. As in that little snowball fight. :] |
TJWasNotHere chapter 14 . 8/12/2010 Hmmm, I'm liking this developing FranxBalthierxAshe triangle... :3 And then the earlier PeneloxBalthier and PeneloxBasch hints... Again, it adds depth to the potential relationships between Ashe and the two guys. It's really nice. The one thing that does irk me if I were to critique it is the occasional weird word usage... Like "fairy" as a verb in this Shard. I get what you're saying when that happens, it's not indecipherable, it's just kind of a common matter of correct/incorrect grammar. |
TJWasNotHere chapter 8 . 8/11/2010 I have to say, I like how you explore this love triangle, it's very realistic, to include memories of Ashe's past with Rasler, as well as her slow warming up to Basch and the flirting with Balthier (or, I should say, vice versa :P). It makes it that much more believable. |
TJWasNotHere chapter 4 . 8/11/2010 Hahahaha, love it. That is so something Balthier would do. x] |
TJWasNotHere chapter 2 . 8/11/2010 Ain't nothin' wrong with writing short, sweet oneshots just for fun. (The only thing stopping me from drabbling is my usual perfectionism :P) Looks like this collection certainly wasn't overlooked, anyway. ;] I think this series works, because it is pretty artfully worded even as a kind of experimental writing venture, but also because it's very to the point. It touches down on all these little ideas that a lot of FFXII fans must ponder... On that note, yeah, I definitely thought there was somethin' with Ashe and Vossler. :o Something... |