| Reviews for The Omen |
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Guest chapter 9 . 10/11/2011 Thanks for sharing. Although i strongly suggest you use double quotation marks(") not single('). JJ/Reid ftw! As in a couple as in romance lol. ;) |
laneydaze96 chapter 2 . 1/28/2011 i have to say, i LOVED the pumpkin scene. |
liberal4peace chapter 2 . 2/28/2010 JJ's very flirty today! |
harrietamidala1691 chapter 1 . 2/25/2010 Oh no, not another schophrenzic killer! |
harrietamidala chapter 1 . 2/16/2010 I love the little scene with JJ and Reid carving a pumpkin-even though it was actually for Jack Hotchner! Oops, they owe him a pumpkin. There is a bit of an irony though, Matthew Gray Gubler is actually allergic to pumpkins (at least too many of them) in real life, from an interview I saw on YouTube. |
Sue1313 chapter 9 . 7/16/2008 This was very good. I just love the interaction with Reid and JJ. It was exciting and a surprise at the end with the little boy. Really good. |
deceasedacct chapter 9 . 5/15/2008 Absolutely great! While I was waiting for the next chapter of "El Camaleon" (which I hope you'll update soon), I decided to check out your other fics... GREAT! I love everything in your fic, how you chose to describe your characters, the dialogues between Reid and JJ, the plot, the kind of unsub you decided to use (well described, Annabelle is really scary), and even the song you decided to put in at the end! Really, I enjoyed your fic a lot! And there's JJ/Reid in it... perfect! (Long review uh? XD) |
SLITH chapter 9 . 3/6/2008 Dang - what an ending - loved the comments and JJ telling Reid to shut up as I guess because her roling her eyes or offering to get a coffee and such wouldn't work like normal. Sounds like she would have needed a few stitches by your description from the glass jar getting her - sounds painful. Not to mention the blood loss would leave ya tired - I guess lol. Awesome story none-the-less. I completely enjoyed it and Morgan's pointing a gun at 3 trick-or-treaters lol. Surprised that Ana didn't spaz out or lash out on JJ for having spat on her but then again - she was caught up in her own twisted word. SLITH |
Rumplebumple chapter 8 . 2/5/2008 Love your story! Wanted to let you know though that something's wrong w/ chapter 8. Starting w/ "āIām scared,ā the boy said quietly..." the same paragraphs are repeated, and we don't actually the part where it seems Spence was burned and Mays actually dies is not there. Just wanted to let you know, i'm sure it was a posting mixup. Can't wait to read the fixed chapter! |
gjhkfud chapter 9 . 2/2/2008 That was so awesome, I loved it, but do you realize that in the chapter before this one, it kinda repeated the same stuff over and over? It gave me a headache. |
tjl chapter 9 . 2/2/2008 Thanks for a great story. I love the final song, it happens to be one of my favourites. When Reid made the comment about being able to regenerate and heal, I was expecting a comment about that it only heals physical hurts, not emotional ones. I look forward to what you write next. |
lady of scarlet chapter 9 . 2/2/2008 Okay, wow, so worth the wait! I'm thrilled that you decided to finish this one, it was excellent, the mounting tension, the beautiful writting and a poetic closing scene. Loved the lyrics at the end too, very fitting! |
101spacemonkey chapter 9 . 2/2/2008 aw that was sweet! nice song lyrics at the end! |
101spacemonkey chapter 8 . 2/2/2008 what does jj mean by 'shut up and save yourdelf spence'? maybe im just too tired to function, and i am therefore messing things up as i could have sworn part of this repeated itself, but then again the computer is playing up, so meh that annabelle is scary... |
101spacemonkey chapter 7 . 2/2/2008 yeah its a memeber of his team, that makes all teh difference benson, so there! aw reid called them... that was sweet... i know it probab ly wasnt meant to be seen as that, but i couldnt help it he sounded so calm! im not sure thats a good thing... |