Reviews for Fallout
willtrytowriteforfreebooks chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
neither am i but having just gotten the highest grade i have in months by 20 points on a science test about radiation i will say that nothing sounds glaringly wrong and as long as the person isnt a nuclear physicst or chemist ill back you up
Don-Jam chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
The greenhouses were good, that the kind of thing Mayor Green think of. Skylar Grandma was good thinking.

"She was a dreadful old harpy and made everybody around her miserable.”

“I don’t see that carved on the headstone.” Love that bit.

The thing with the strawberries and the Dale and Skylar flirting was too good. And Mimi with the Birth Control pills was good, I like to know why there were not more babys on Jericho? When somthing like that is going on, we Humens have lots of sex, we just do, look at WW2 in Europe.

No Birth Control lots of babys.

No Birth Control 'the End of the World' Babys everwere.

But they cannot put that on TV can they? If Dale had goten Skylar Pregnant, a lot of not like it, after all Teen Pregnancy is Not a good thing. But it what happen over here in the UK in WW2 and back then we had a BIG thing about no sex before marriage too. Why I'm I going on that you about this? I do not know, sorry.

The at the end was good. When she give him the pocket watch I was so happy, it was just so sweet. It make me think of my family and heirloom we have, most of them are rings but we have some other thing too. With us the heirlooms "have stay in the family no matter what" and so when we give one, it our we have say, 'You ARE family and I and we(becoue the family as to say it OK before you can give one) are keeping you no matter what'. I just love that bit, becoue from my POV that what she was saying to him, I know that may not be what you are sayimg but that what I got from it.

Thank you and keep them coming.
charming2drew chapter 1 . 8/11/2008
Scratch that-this was by far one of my favs! I really like how you did the sequence of it! :)

I really hope that you continue to write Jericho fics, especially Dale, and Skylar!

You're so good at it!

Abbz
pheobe d chapter 1 . 7/5/2008
This is awesome! I just finished watching all of season one Jericho on dvd and I was hoping that there was some great dale/skylar fanfic out there. I am so glad that i came across all of yours. This is a really good story and captures the romance and characters perfectly.
Lavalata chapter 1 . 2/15/2008
Great story! The M*A*S*H* reference with Jake and Stanley was guinius. Keep up the good work!

Lavalata
Madripoor Rose chapter 1 . 11/3/2007
Cool story. The idea of the windshield greenhouses is really neat.