What a fantastic, FANTASTIC story! You put so much thought into all of it, I loved it :)

A most excellent start of a promising story! :D

Alright so I know you finished this story years ago but I'm a firm believer in great authors being told how great they are years after their work has finished.

This was an incredible story, it had length, depth, character development, and what's even more amazing for this website - it finished! I won't spend pages elaborating what a superb job you did with *everything* because I'm sure you knew it was amazing when you wrote it.

Really the main reason I wanted to review was to brighten your day by reminding you people still read things you've posted and appreciate you sharing your creativity and effort with us. In a sense returning what you've given us.

And if you haven't heard of it yet (I'm not sure when the final books were translated), the FMP story has been concluded. If you do a search for "Always Stand By Me Scribd" you can find it online. There's a part 1 and 2 but I think they pick up right around where Sigma has currently left off.

What I think is kinda funny is how closely events in your story follow what actually happens. I guess a final closing compliment I wanted to leave you was that your writing is about on par with the author's. They have more content, but your writing style itself is just as great as the books.

Thank you again for giving us such a wonderful read. And don't feel bad for not killing main characters - it's such a closure cop out anyway haha.

the first fmp fanfic i've read that i loved. says a lot!

i forgot that i've read this fic and reviewed it...

but anyway...

reading this in one sitting made me realize that it's okay that you didn't kill the "good" characters...

coz i heard that in the novel, kurz did!

gah!

humph!

but anyway...

i know that kaname would never link herself with leonard...

but i'm thinking that i want to read a fic with a triangle among kaname, sousuke, and leonard...

teeheehee...

i want to know how sousuke would react if leonard was constantly around being a pesky suitor to kaname...

so...

i hope you'd indulge me in this request...?

This story was very cute. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you.

So well written! Can't wait to read more. :)

aww! I was hoping leonard would have survived. But you're right, him sitting in a prison cell is just, not right. x) lovely story!

really good story, i've recently become a fan of FMP and really enjoyed reading this. great work :)

Li Bo?

*Cackle laugh*

Im learning about that dude well I did..

Im in 7th grade..

Thats so cool I can compaire myself to Japanese high school life *Dies*

Very suspensful story for the girl to switch sides with the enemy, thus testing the love between Sousuke and Kaname.

In short: Very Good Story!

The way your new kaname is described along with her experiments reminds me Halo's Dr. Kathrine Halsey, creater of the SPARTAN-II project. Her intelligence slowly draining her humanity and sanity, and the ethics of her actions come into question for the greater good.

I realize you updated this a while ago but I've only just had the chance to read it the last two chapters now. I think you handled them superbly. It was sweet, but not to the point where you felt like it didn't fit with the rest of the story. It was a nice break from the delicious angst we read in some of the earlier chapters. Congrats on finishing this awesome piece. It's one to be proud of, for sure.

All the best,

Langus

I have found that I must comment on such an outstanding story, and I apologize for not having commented earlier. I had to read through the entire thing before I could give my opinion. As some people have horrible endings that are in complete contrast to the rest of their story. They, as you said, wrap it up in a neat little bow. That, of course, is besides the point. My main objective was -all in all- to praise: your use of language, grammar and lastly skills as a raconteur. I have seen only a handful of people able to develop a story as effectively as you did and I sincerely hope you continue to write and develop your skills. Your story was extremely captivating and beautiful and I plan on reading it again in the near future. Thank you.

P.S. UR AWESOME! ...Sorry, had to add it.

I haven't caught up with the LJ translations of the novels. Just never got around to it, but I can imagine how dark those stories have gotten.

In any case, your imagery is fantastic as always, and this is was quite the wonderful ending. I've praised this story enough, and I cannot say just how incredible and amazing this journey has been. I was glad to be part of it, even if it was just as a reader, and I... well, I can ramble for hours, but you already know how I feel.

Marvelous job. Thank you SO much for sharing this with us. I've lost a lot of faith in FMP!, but reading something like this reignites my curiosity and urges me to find out how things turned out. Eventually I'll pick up FMP! Again. In the meantime, don't be a stranger! :-)

actually...

i was wishing you'd kill tessa...

i so hate her...

anyway...

hope you update soon!