It so good!i dnt knw why wud u think it wasnt!plz continue writtin!:-D

way more than acceptable!

I. Love. It.

I don't usually read smut, but wow, that was really good! You captured Luna perfectly (have to love her). I especially liked that Hermione wasn't with Ron (I can't stand Hermione/Ron). Now I'm going to have a look at your other fics!

remuslover xoxo

Very well written for a first femmeslash, although you may want to go for a bit more length if you so choose to write a second one. All in all, a good read! (:

I've never really been able to bring myself to read a Luna/Hermione before. But I really liked this one!

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fabulous! it was cute and sweet..totally not horrible

Are you kidding? That wasn't horrible it was very arousing. I liked how Hermione was scared because I do think it is hard for lesbians to completely accept what they feel. One of my friends recently came out of the closet so it hits a sensitive spot with me knowing that she's facing a tough time with her girlfriend right now. It was touching and I love how you wrote Luna. She was spot on and made me chuckle even as I was getting turned on. I think you should write another one because this was fantastic. It had love, lots of delicious sex, and best of all Hermione wasn't with Ron which just makes my day. I've been thinking of doing some femme slash too but I didn't want it to get taken down but still I wasn't exactly being chaste in Tutelage of Hermione, so I think I will try that soon. Excellent job, I'm serious you should try writing another one!

OMG I love this pairing! I adore how insecure your Hermione is, and how comfortable Luna is. Honestly these two fit so well together.

Oh my god, Milly! That was amazing! AND IT WAS DEDICATED TO ME! BOOYA! I loved it. I don't know why, but I think you've gotten Luna perfectly - she was all "Woo" and spaced and everything. I think you should dominate the world with your smut! *sits in a dark corner and chuckles evilly* Heh heh heh heh. Brilliant, my Babycakes!

Ooh, and I got the postcards to send you and Shnee now Mwuahaha! Now.. to find your addresses :O

xox Yazzi

Love you!

That was soo good deary! A weird pairing but you pulled it off very well! I think you captured Hermione perfectly! *wiggles* I'm so proud! *wipes tear away* Bien Fait!

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