| Reviews for Lost Son of Konoha |
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Axccel chapter 5 . 7/19 It's not fishnet (I hope not, especially on a kid) if you're referring to that netting-like stuff in the manga and anime. It's mesh armor. Like chain mail with wire and small plates. |
BURNER2134 chapter 1 . 7/1 I started this years ago and it wasn’t finished, but you also weren’t working on it for years but I’ve been getting emails about updates because I followed either you or the story but I was hoping you’d continue. So I thank you for finding the time to continue. You don’t understand how much this means to me. FanFiction gets my mind off of my time in MARSOC. |
Kitsune Obsessed Freak chapter 9 . 6/29 Yonbi. Not shichibi. They both mean four, but one also means death so they don't use that very often |
Kitsune Obsessed Freak chapter 8 . 6/29 Also dude, watch boruto if you actually belive the crap you're spouting. I honestly don't like that anime one bit, but it proves you wrong in more ways than one, lol |
Kitsune Obsessed Freak chapter 8 . 6/29 I'm just going to laugh at you for a few seconds, because it happened. Also because there has been foreshadowing over the Entire flipping series. Take the pein battle from shippuden, and even the academy in the original naruto. I could tell by the chunin exams who was going to get with naruto. Don't be a dick to people just because they don't have the same opinion as you. You made an entire chapter just to say "fvck everyone who doesn't agree with my arrogant, pissy, bullsh* attitude" like come on dude. That's so not cool. I hope one day you look back on this and realize how rediculous it is, and remove the chapter entirely so that people don't have to read such ignorant crap. |
Zoran Dawn-Eclipse chapter 41 . 6/27 Perfect ending to the chapter. Loved it. |
Jebest4781 chapter 41 . 6/27 well this was pretty good and can't wait to see how you'll finish up this story |
RedTokyo95 chapter 8 . 6/20 Damn dude, I'll admit that you opened my eyes to quite a few things, I am a Hinata fan, but only because I love shy personalities. You have a way with words, and information to back it up. Honestly if I were in a debate with you, I would have immediately shut up and actually logically think about it from other perspectives.(unlike other narrow minded simple minded assholes) So you have my respect. Though I doubt that you would care to acknowledge me. All I can hope for is people who can get Hinata a good personality change. (Thank God for fanfics) But I'll say this. Sakura is fixed up, you did a good job. But I will still be a Hinata fan. |
Hakeemj chapter 33 . 6/20 I recommend downhill demolition Had a lot of fun with it |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/9 Hi Fury Cutter, can you delete this comment when you're done reading it? Just hear me out for five seconds. There's a lot of Naruto crossover writers on the site, and some are popular while some are neglected. For the neglected ones, this is dissapointing because people barely review while said neglected ones have a silent audience that rarely reviews at all. These writers can write and put their hearts into their work, but they barely get any attention, much less a nice review to make their day. Another factor would be that the popular ones follow down a constant trend of tropes while the ones that don't barely get anything. Now, I know you follow down clichés and tropes, and I don't judge you for following down what you want. I know it's wrong to say, but many people on this site who don't write don't understand how much a review means to an author. You can probably understand because at one point, you were probably underrated... Probably... Now, here's a quote some popular authors put on their profiles. All of it is true, but it feels like a way to guilt trip the reader as well, which is why many aspiring writers don't put it on their page out of the fear of being called out as a narcissist. """And here's something concerning 'REVIEWS', which I copied from 'The Superior Straight Edge': Writers- all of them, from famous authors to subtle FF writers- ALL depend on the feedback from our readers. Vision Dominican brought up an interesting albeit tragically true idea: "Lack of reviews is the greatest killer of fan fic writers out there. We at the institute wish to let the public know of how they can pitch in to save our dying writers. 1) Drop a review every other chapter. It may not seem like much, but reviews are actually what many of us want to see. That, and hits. Hits do make us happy but we don't really know if people like our story or not. 2) Visit our author page. Those kind of hits really make us happy. It's where we showcase our entourage of friends, beta readers, and stories. Some of us even tidy up with set areas for upcoming story ideas and character bios. 3) Send an email. While normally I'd prefer a review, emails are just as good. Really, it warms my heart to communicate with another reader or writer." What you call being "too lazy to review" is what we call "a flame to the pages" as the writers. That one minute or two that you felt "too lazy" to review is another minute of creeping discouragement that all writers feel as they begin to think... "Why am I even here…?" "What's even the point of continuing?" "My skills must be terrible…no one cares for my story…" "I'll never be a good writer...I quit." These are only a few thoughts that go through every writer's head- that go through MY head- when we put out a chapter / story with all our heart and soul within, and we sit there…and sit…and wait…and not a single person says even a word. If you're not a writer, you have NO IDEA how much that hurts… If you ARE a writer, then I'm sure you know just how great it feels when someone is kind enough to leave a heartwarming and encouraging review, and you read it, smiling while thinking…"Wow…fuck...I did it…" So, why not give fellow writers the same luxury here? Too many times I've seen epic and utterly beautiful works of literary art fall to pieces before finally being abandoned due to the terrible discouragement that the lack of reviews can cause. Sometimes, it is so severe that the very writer himself decides to quit, denying the world his skills of writing that I'm it would have deeply enjoyed. So… Just one minute, that's all it takes. Just a few gentle taps of the fingers on your keyboard, a few seconds or so of your time, and your words can SAVE a writer from a dark demise. Do me a favor: Go find a story, ANY story, anywhere here on Fanfic,net, and see if you can help it. If it has very little / no reviews at all, just check it out, and say whatever comes to mind. And enjoy the thought in mind that you could have just SAVED that story, with just a few taps of the keyboard…""" I don't have the power to help, but you actually do. You have a good following, and your word can reach hundreds and do so much. You can't trust me since I'm just some guy on the internet, but trust me on the behalf of other writers on the site that it hurts to hear crickets from a silent audience. By deleting this comment, it means you're listening and willing to spread word. And if you are listening, thank you, it really means a lot. Be sure to remember there are filters from the M-rated stories. These are the ones that aren't given any attention. From the mysterious guest with too much free time on his hands~ |
Zoran Dawn-Eclipse chapter 40 . 6/8 Happy birthday! (not sure if I got the timing right) This was a great chapter, and I'm looking forward to seeing the next one. |
GamerX568 chapter 40 . 6/6 This way of Madara appearing is even more bullshit than Canon Naruto. |
Jebest4781 chapter 40 . 6/5 Can’t wait to see how the rest of this will turn out |
Jostanos chapter 40 . 6/5 HAPPY BIRTHDAY, FURY CUTTER! *eye smiles* |
SonicBlast4444 chapter 8 . 4/19 Reading this specific chapter(thing). And then thought not wrong but apparantly kishimoto gives 0 shits. Naruhina is canon as is sasusaku. Not a fan of either personally. Id prefer naruten or narutema. Or hell, shizuka from nadeshiko. Narusaku...s'alright to me dont hate it, well, usually, but im not all for it either. Narusasu...is a weird pairing. Dont get me wromg, it can work. Gender bendimg us a thing in the narutoverse. Sexy jutsu amd reverse sexy jutsu. So i can believe a female sasuke or naruto with the other. But there does have to be an actually bind and relationship. Doing it out the blue. No. Kinda 1 of the reasons i actually like Uchiha Heiress. It did the relationship right, to an extent at least. Also i recignise the fic u mentioned. The one where sakura is married to naruto, dasuke returns, sakura divorces naruto and leavees him with their kid. Thats a naruIno fic. I recall it. Been ages since i read it. Will have to locate it. |