Okay, well I have to say the story up till the ending was really good. I really liked what you did with Sakura’s character even though you basically copied most of the dialogue and moments out of the anime, which made certain parts a bit of tedious to read through the new plot you had with Sakura felt really well integrated. Then the ending came and I’m sorry but it was really fast paced and gruesome. I don’t know if you planned it from the very beginning or not but it totally deviated from the rest of the tone and feel from the rest of the story. I understand that college life can make it difficult to keeping writing stories but if you’re going to do a rushed ending don’t make it where it suddenly just slams into people’s faces with a totally contradicting mood. Overall I give this story a C. It would’ve been much higher even with the rushed latter part but I’m sorry that ending totally sucked! This story had a lot of potential...but oh well.

Could’ve been a great story... But you destroyed that by absolutely rushing through the last few chapters. So at the end of the day, the beginning was good, the middle of it was okay, but getting towards the end after Sakura gets kidnapped by the akastki... It wasn’t that good. Very disappointed with the last 5 or so chapters.

Well this was different I'll give u that Sakura the scorned Child is a new take she seems pretty badass being friends with Hinata though not sure about that

I stopped reading when it became narusaku, It was good up until that point but I really don't like the ship

Excuse me! Author San I want inner Sakura and Kurama (real the demon fox name) be together along with NarSaku

Excuse me, Author San Hatake Kakashi don't have his Hatie-ate over his right eye. But The Hatie-ate over his left eye and it's due to his shargain given by Obito.

AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! THIS IS SO AMAZING AND AWESOME! I was feeling pretty down earlier and this just made me a bit happier!

You teme! You made me cry!
It hurts so good I want to hate you but I can't!
And ignore the troll

I love it

I'm sorry, but this has been bothering me. Hatai-ate is spelled Hitai-ate. Also, wouldn't Sakura's long hair and some pieces of her outfit be impractical? It's a bit odd that she's into fashion and is a hate-consumed child at the same time. They don't quite match. Other than that, I like it so far.

Plus, Haruno kekkei genkai is weak and pathetic. Why tf u wan a fkin emotion kekkei genkai. Kakashi said that theres one haruno that kill shit tons of ninjas with their kekkei genkai. Sakuras a prodigy but damn shes weak. Always need to be protected.

Sakura is dumb af. She said that shes like some kind of fucking weapons from her father but cnt even defeat a fuckin low rank ninja. Also, bitch to her friend now they have to save her fckin ass.

Stupid sakura so weak. Always fainted with useless kekkei genkai. Very shit.

D:

love this sory but too sad.