This was a great and compelling read. I like the mix of real, with hallucination, with flashbacks. Thanks for writing!

This was a great story! It felt like Classic SG-1, like I was watching an episode. And I loved how you even managed to include Jack in a few flashbacks and comments.

You are a pro at writing and I found absolutely nothing to draw me away from the story you were telling. Bravo and thanks for posting a masterful team adventure for me to enjoy!

I love this story, I was going through my favorites and reread it. It is so wonderfully woven together, really well done. :-)

Great story! I really enjoyed it:) I think I'm going to go to your profile and read some more of your work. I hope they are all this good:D

Wow, this story was great. I loved it completely. The most touching scene from the first chapter was Vala hugging Daniel and feeling slightly confused at his reaction of not letting go. So sweet. I enjoyed how the team supported him, and the flashbacks were done excellently.

It's great how you weaved Kelowna into the nightmares, very creepy sequences. Wonderfully done!

nice

This was really good at maintaining a sense of confusion for both Daniel and the reader. The concept itself was relatively simple which made the story telling even more effective. I liked that the situation brought all Daniel's own doubts about his guilt and worth (as seen in "Meridian")for him to use to punish himself. The final team bonding moment over raiding the fridge was a perfect light friendship moment to finish on.

I love, love, love it! Great writing!

I like how you ended it, almost lighthearted and with the great team affection they have for eachother!

Hope to read more from you soon!

Greetz from Germany

I really enjoyed your story. I loved all the flashbacks. Poor Daniel really got whumped but his team was there to save him. It was a great idea to combine the Kelownan memories with the Rahsonia memories. Love how you wrote all the characters especially Vala. The ending had a great teamy feel to it. Love that Vala got everyone out of bed to go find Daniel. The commissary raid was fun.

i was thinking of my review as i read i had thought about planning on saying that t newbies to the team were likethe new kids and as such were acting like it, and then daniel got involved, ha, i dont think they need to hide form teh camea, its not like they would get in trouble over it, or would they... ha!

nice ending...

i cant wait for the next chapter, this fic is complete right? and as such its going to be wrapped up in the next chapter... yay! i love conclusions, i love the way everyhing wraps itself up and someimes not even then... i guess upcoming team interatction... yay i love that, normally i like more whump, but this i think has been a nice mix of the 2...

hehe its getting to a cimax, and i have to go fo a bit, dinner, damn, and i was just getting into the swing of it...

nuts oh well, i love the flashback bits its like hurt and comfort at once instead of separately, hehe...

this is so sweet, there is so much more i think that can be said... i cn almost sense something being magically reveled in the next few chapters... such as what it was that daniel needed to tell the others.

im going to review as i go along;

in the last chapter i thought that maybe an almost hathor thing had happened, and that sall im saying...

and now well, not liking to be touched, the bruises... well i dont know... hehe

aw, fightened animal...

oh, everything else, drugs, thsi does sound hator-esque, and in case you are wonderingi dont xpct her to jump out from round the corner, i just seem to have hathor on the brain...

yep definate references to meriian, it wassuch a beautiful and upsetting episode, but i loved it anyway...

easier to control... you know this is just feeding my theory...

a nightmare, oh, intersting, very intersting...

and the voices, it could be all part of the control, like brainwashing, or maybe mackenzie is going to poke is nasty wee self around the corner, i dont like that man, is he even mentioned in season 10, did he leave earlier in another season, my SG-1 timeline is a wee bit messed up...

i havent seen season 10 yet in fact im still going through season 9, too many exams not enough time.

anyways, i love this im not a huge fan of vala (i dont mind her, she is funny and all, but... well you'll see in the following rant), i dont like references to prometheus unbound, nothing happened there, nothing i tell you! she never went with daniel, i refuse to accept it, oh well rant over, this is brilliant, there is so mcuh room for things to be said or unsaid...