I've read this story 8xs and it gets better each time! I especially loved it when Riddick broke Tracy down with the hot sex(jealous much?)! Damn, all the sex was hot! You have a gift for storytelling. Write more please. It's 2015, lady, I needs me some more! :-)

Wow. Okay, you had me completely fooled. I could have SWORN up and down on my favorite tree that it was Riddick she was hunting originally.

I also adore the use of vocabulary words, the way you compare revenge to how it could taste, sweet or cold. This was/is sheer poetry.

Fantastically written, loved it! Excellent balance with the emotional content. Not enough to be melodramatic, but enough to bring the characters to life. Kyra was a little flat, but since she wasn't as prominent it didn't affect the story at all. Loved the touch of the dog. :)

Huh. HEA, eh? I'm a little shocked. And a little annoyed. I gotta admit I wasn't too fond of your OC. But not unfond enough to stop reading obviously, so points there. Original plot, good details, well done twists. Too light on Jack for my taste, but that doesn't mean it's not good. Bravo.

Wow. I've been waiting 7 chapters for for a Jack and Riddick reunion and you totally caught me out. I thought maybe Tracy might go down, but Jack? Fuck. You are a cold, cold woman. ; p Bonus points for eliciting shocked surprise.

This is really sweet! Thanks so much for posting.

Great story!

I can honestly say that this is one of the best stories I've ever read!

Awesome!

that was awesome i loved it

Fan-fucking-tastic, one of the best Riddick stories on here! Loved it man, loved it.

I just found your story and just thought I should leave a rev ;-) I am impressed. Honestly and deeply. True emotions which I could feel as well. Strong plot, easy but interesting nonetheless. Very strong characters, all of them in their own way. I like your style a lot ;-)

And I am so glad that this has a happy end. I like the thought of Tracy and Riddick together. As family and both part of the human race. It shows hope to everyone even him. And I guess that - after what happened in your story - he deserves it.

What can I say about the adult parts? :-) Hot? Sexy? Making me want the same thing? :-) Yes to all and a lot more. It has always style the way you write it and I just love it.

And I feel this is the right time to end the story. Dont want to know what happens afterwards as I would like to think they will have their live.

i love how you wrote this story!

i really like the way this ended it's a great conclusion

Awesome, this was a great fic.