MacTavish? That’s Max's surname! Did he become a cop?!

Tad, oblivious... I feel like something unexpected happens after this.

Wait, oh I JUST noticed the last sentence, must've been too drunk on Tad feels to notice.

Woah freaking nellie tbh..

I didn't know Tad had it in him.

He deserved it though...

Yay! finally a story I find about Tad! You did an amazing job on this story, I'm happy you made it! 5 reviews? pfft this story deserves more :3... Like the other reviewers, I think you kept him in character. Bah, I knew Max would end him playing him at the end... life is not fair xO...

Ah, Tad. :: spasm :: Excellent story. And you managed to keep the darkness in character, falsified british accent and all.

A good Story, well qritten and even though gary wasn't in it, it kept me entertained. Nice story and a seqel would be cool if it's possible.

At last his dad got what was coming to him! It's a really good story, I love it! :)

Ah! I /loved/ this! :D It was really interesting and exciting. It's cool how you characterized Max, and how sneaky he was at the end. XD Poor Tad. You made me feel so bad for him. T.T His father was a bastard.

Anyways, I'll point out that you had some grammar issues, and little typos. But because this was just for warm up, then it's alright. :D

Wow, go Tad! He sure did what he had to do to protect his beloved mother. And the ending-very sneak! This was a very well written Tad-centered fic; a dark side of him that was also in character. Please keep up the good work.