I love this!

Some sentences were wehay too loong, and you used too many buts, but aside from that it rocked, I especially liked the "couldn't even hide happiness" line, most people say that the smiles are a mask but Ithink you're probably closer to the mark.

Peace out and Rock on,

Anzer'ke.

P.S. See what I mean about the long sentences.

wow, this was amazing :D

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Aw, tho thweet, very emotional. Rather epic. But I enjoyed it! :) Now we're even, mwahahahahaha.

.GOD.

AMBER! SCKEW *jumps on amber with a huge crushing hug*

i missed u! and your stories! nice penname 2, tis cute as!

oh i loved ur story also even though i have no idea wots its about .. i read it anyway! i promise ill play final fantasy soon .. i swear! xx love you!