This is a beautiful concept, and very well done. Awesome work!

Love it.

This is beautifully written! I love the ideas you come up with, and how you throw them in so casually makes it seem as if the original author might have even said it (though I know that's not the case, it just seems so natural and fitting)! Fabulous job! I will be awaiting more of your work. :)

i love this story and i love Hikaru Hitachiin so much when they do they brotherly love it is so beautiful everytime he does that to he brother i fell in love with him ever more

I like this very much. I'm not exactly sure why but I think it's mostly how you have the twins deal not only with themselved but also how they deal with the world, people and the club.

I partucularly like how they revolve/circle around Haruhi, their feelings and their actions.

This was extremely well written. I usually try to pinpoint one specific spot that I liked but I can't. It was just fabulously written yet very understated. I liked how 'normal' the drama was. It didn't delve too deeply into the unrealistic but showed another facet of the twins that was well developed and expressed. Please keep writing such wonderful works.

I'm not sure how to describe this story... In one word I would say 'Amazing'. I really liked the way they were bonded, with more than a psychic link. As though they were one person, and yet different...Somehow you made it make sense.

Wonderful.

this was defintly different

awesome thow . i love the twins! ;)

I d'awed. Something I shouldn't do aloud when my parents are in bed. Seriously xD

Beautiful story, beautifuly written, and a very nice visual of the twins of Ouran.

*gives cookie* :) you earn a cookie and an internetz *gives you an internetz* I'm weird like that. 3

Oh, I really liked it! :)

I must say, this has to be the most original, well-thought-out, and creative Hikaru and Kaoru story I have ever read. I am not a fan of the Twins x Haruhi thing, but I still loved it.

Here's an interesting tidbit for you:

My best friend and I have a bond similar to this. We probably come as close to this as two people in the real world actually can. We're like ET and Elliot, almost. When she is sad, I am sad. When she is happy, I am happy. When she laughs, I laugh. That may sound normal, but here's the kicker...We live in different states. We just know. Once, in the middle of band class, I just started crying, and I instantly knew why. When I got home, I called her and said, "He broke up with you, didn't he?" And she started crying and said yes.

But enough about my life. I LOVED LOVED LOVED your story. Crazy awesome. Twelve thumbs up!

this is amazing I really love this normally I aren't a big HaruxHikaxKao fan but I do like this thank you

Hi. I like your story a lot. I don't think what's really going on is twincest though. Some people might see it that way, but I see it as two people being as close to each other as they can possibly be unless they were the same person.

Still, it's a really good story and one of the very few that has captivated me. I hope to see more of your work in the future.

Childofdarknessanddespair

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I like it

Don't have any idea where it came from

but original

and interesting

*thumbs up*

:D

i really loved it.. it is interesting and different it has such a and original idea. It was a little complicated but that make it more and more interesting, i really liked the way you writed this.

GREAT JOB! i really enjoyed myself :D