This oneshot is...interesting.
I like it, but...it's a bit rushed, to be honest. Like, there are many things written in short paragraphs...if you know what I mean :P
But it's good :)
..I'm okay with Roddy and Bastan dead, I admit, but Bellatrix AND Voldy NOOOO xD
..just thought you ought to know ;)

hervissa :)

It makes more sense than Molly Weasley succeeding in successfully using the AK to kill one of the most powerful witches in the world. Sorry, I'm still not over that and I totally agree with your disclaimer. LOVED this story by the way!

I like this story

I was sad that the deatheaters lost

**rips page with bellatrix's death out of deathly hallows and replaces with this fanfic** lol i love your ending way better than jk rowlings. I'll avada kedavra her for killing my favorite character bellatrix. Why did she have to die? Couldn't she have been redeemed? I mean, there was still some good left in her, she still knew how to love.

HOW DARE YOU WANT MOLLY DIED AND HOW CAN YOU TALK ABOUT THE WEASLEY FAMILY WITH SUCH DISRESPECT! FRED DESERVED A LITTLE MORE OF YOUR RESPECT AND I DON'T LIKE BELLATRIX! HOW DARE YOU! HOW DARE YOU! NEVER AGAIN WILL I READ ONE OF YOUR STORIES ON HERE! I WILL ALSO BE TELLING MY FRIENDS ABOUT THIS AND YOU WILL BE RECIEVING SOME FAIRLY ANGRY MESSAGES!

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But the story was good.

REST IN PEACE FRED WEASLEY

Haha I love your Disclaimer! I know It's just wrong to see Bella die! She just can't!

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Cool! Obviously, you're right, it couldn't happen, but Bella's death still hasn't sunk in with me yet! That's why I'm not on the floor screaming and beating my fists against the carpet... _ I think it became a little rushed towards the end. Also, I TOTALLY agree with your disclaimer! Evil b*h of a Weasley... I quite like the idea of Bellatrix loving Rodulphus, even if it is clear that she was madly in love with Voldemort and had eyes for no one else! If you like Bellafic, that's practically all I write, if you want to check it out...