yes and while your passion for this fanfic leaves, as does the bullet from my gun, aimed for that passionless little skul of yours

Ahem, just saying, there is no such thing as "otou-kun" in Japanese for "dad" or father". The prefix "-kun" is highly casual and is ONLY used for friends or lower relatives. A higher person can say it to a lower person in status. Last time I checked, a son is not higher status than his father.

So it would most likely be "otou-san". More formal, but not too formal.

Just check on the Japanese.

need more please _ good job I giggled and smile through them both. keep it up! xxxDR

great chapter and great story

you should update it

Why havnt you updated yet?

Aww, this is a really good story, I do hope you continue it :)

This story is soo good! You've got to add more to this!

Hizashi died when Neji was four, during the conflict with Cloud, the man sacrificed himself in Hiashi's place to appease those from Cloud when they threatened to break the fragile treaty between Konoha and their village. Which actually is quite stupid seeing as Cloud tried to kidnap Hinata and Hiashi killed the would-be kidnapper, that was the beggining of the conflict. Hizashi was the one handed over so, upon his death, the Kekkei Genkai would seal itself, preventing others from being able to take it, which they would have been able to do had it been Hiashi or Hinata.

So, having explained all that, I think this fic is going pretty well, just wondering how exactly you're getting Naruto with Sakura, and when you're planning on updating this.

I could do Kyuubis gift and this one

Cool story, hope you can update soon!

awesome fic, can't wait to read more

this story is great i hope you are going to update the next chapter soon cause this is a great story. narusaku forever :)

helloz, me again. what happened to this story? it's been close to a year since an update has come!-whines- I just read this and I am already loving it so I wanna see what happens next. If I must I could be a beta, whatever the heck that is

-Aicirret

ok I like this so is Naruto going to be teamed with lee and tenten and or be tenten's boyfriend cause I think both would be good I like naruten please update soon

i really love this story

can't wait for the next update