The last chapter made me cry…

Omg... Je suis francaise, mais ta Fanfic avais l'air tellement interessante que je l'ai traduite. J'ai pleurer comme jamais devant une fic... Elle ma fait realiser tant de choses... Il m'a fallut plusieurs jours pour m'en remettre. Elle ma boulverser... elle est si profond.. merci à toi 3

Thank you

omg. you made me cry. you really made me cry. you know, i had been thinking that i wanted to read a sad ending but i disposed that thought when i noticed you were leading us in a happy ending so i really got surprised that i would really get the sad ending. it's just so realistic, i must say. i love how you ended your story, i really do. it got me emotional. to cut things short, i love it. thank you so much for making this wonderful story.

THANKS for writing this story.. it made me realize that life is too short and I should spend every second wisely.. happily and contented.. :D just want to tell you that I've read all of your stories and that they were amazing.. The emotions is just.. Awesome! I hope someday you write again!

..Thanks very much..

This was a great story. I loved the way you wrote the characters. Their actions, albeit sometimes very stupid, were very believable with the context of your story.
I kind of guessed that Rukia would die eventually whether it was soon or later. My cousin died of leukemia at age 17 so this is very believable. However you have to go through chemotherapy which caused you to lose hair, so Rukia would have to be bald or wear a wig, she wouldn't have a fill head of hair, from my knowledge. But that's a minor detail.
I throughly enjoyed reading this story and all your writing. I'll probably go ahead and read the companion pieces to this now. :)
-AngelofDarkus

I think this is the only fanfiction I have ever read that made me cry so many times. I am so happy this fic exists, and I'm sure it wall always be one of my favorites. Thanks for making this, no thanks for all the tears you caused me.

That's a weird way to make friends Ichigo

Imagine if you had cancer for that long.

Ouch, i feel bad for Rukia.

Oh gosh. How do you tell a eight year old they have cancer?

you wrote this like a long time ago, but wow it's really nicely written. it's my first Bleach story (I haven't even got through all of Bleach yet), but it's really enjoyable. I like how you didn't give it a hollywood ending. I think you wrote the characters well especially Rukia, in terms of the dealing with cancer aspect. thanks for such a refreshing read.

You know, the ending was kind of...fitting. I've always read stories where Rukia was diagnosed with some kind of disease, raped...well you kind get the hint. Almost in every story I've seen her...die. She's my favourite anime heroine and its kinda mad seeing her die but then again it was kind of...fitting. (Grins sadly) well good luck for any future stories and love this story. Pretty balanced. Always gonna love this story!

Hmm.. This is an old fanfiction and you'll probably never even see this buut I'm going to give you some constructive criticism anyway. For one; a lot of your sentences lack proper punctuation. All sentences should end with punctuation, no matter what.
Second, he loves her? Hmm. You didn't really do much building on their relationship before that point. All we know is that they're friends and have been for a little while. So putting love there seems a little cheesy. You're only 5 chapters in, why rush?
Don't take this the wrong way, I love your fanfictions. Especially your newer ones. I wish people on here would give more criticism rather than just praise but I suppose some just don't know much about writing or don't care. Anyway, that's my tid-bit.

wow that was so sad i love i am crying now

This story made me cry. But it was a beautiful ending, it really was.