| Reviews for A Fox's Deception |
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zeldawolffang chapter 11 . 7/11 forever cliffhanger feels bad man |
Paul Lenzen chapter 11 . 9/4/2019 This is really good and I will wait for more with anticipation! |
SilverDragon1218 chapter 11 . 5/31/2019 ACK! We never find out about the best friend?! Nooooooo! p.s. hope you're feeling better and that Dementra did well in their studies :D I really liked this fic! Thanx for sharing :D |
Monster King chapter 11 . 4/1/2019 Shame you stopped writing the story |
Tomb Raider and Walking Dead chapter 11 . 7/5/2015 Don't worry about it. Life gets in the way of things. But even if you never come back to this I'm just happy I got to read this. It was just awesome on so many levels. |
Tomb Raider and Walking Dead chapter 7 . 7/5/2015 Again how much good stuff am I going to find in this fic? I loved the whole Haku thing. The first time Naruto meets him ( officially ) was great I loved the question thing and then in the fight I found it sad but something close to the heart. I've never read a fic where Naruto killed Haku in the end an di like that and the fact that Naruto did because of how he felt was just awesome. And then the friend mystery. I can't wait to find that out ( and the Itachi mystery too ). And the whole " I'll bit my tongue out and kill myself thing" was also a nice touch. And then there is Kakashi. He makes a nice funny support/side character doesn't he. He walks the line of funny, stupid, tragedy, and being cool. And I kind off like Sasuke ( that ******* teme ) this way. You not completely bashing him in the unrealistic way ( though I like reading that because Sasuke is a ****** ****** **** ) you did it to where he acts like he did in the chunin arc are should I say the after effects of the chunin arc. And I can't wait to see what happens next with Shukaku, Mashi, Naruto, and Gaara. |
Tomb Raider and Walking Dead chapter 6 . 7/5/2015 There are so many things I like about this chapter. I loved the funny Gai thing with Naruto and Musha. It was just too funny! XD And then Naruto's mask cracking was an enjoyable moment. It was good to see him rant. And I'm glad he found out about him father now instead of later. And then the whole thing with Itachi. There are just so many good things about this story line. Its unique to all the other Naruto mask fics. Its has its funny moments, sad moments, and just an epicness to it. Thanks for writing this I'm enjoying it so much. |
FoxBird chapter 8 . 7/1/2015 This is one of the most original and well written naruto fics ive ever read and i really wish you would continue it sometime soon! (i have my doubts since the last update was in 2012 but i can hope right?) |
TangyCitrus chapter 11 . 5/27/2015 This is basically what I said when I got to this: *high pitched squeel* WHAAAAAAATT?! *normal voice but still loud* I got to the end and I didn't even know it! Damn it! DX Seeing as how this fic hasn't been updated since 2012, i am feeling very saddened that I'll never know who Kaede is, why her parents told Naruto that she died, what the mark Orochimaru put on Sakura will do to her, how Naruto will get the seal placed on him removed, and how or if things will change for the rest of the chuunin exams. Darn it all. This was getting good again since previous chapters were a basic retelling of canon with (seemingly) minor and a few bigger changes, and just GAH! I want to know happens next! *sigh* Regardless, I'd still like to thank the writers for writing and sharing this. Take care and have fun! |
TangyCitrus chapter 2 . 5/26/2015 Hoooooooo~! Sounds incredibly good so far! So excited and intrigued for the rest! This is something I haven't read before and the originality of it and how well just the first chapter was written makes me very hopeful and expectant. :D Thank you for writing and sharing this! Take care and have fun! |
Guest chapter 11 . 1/21/2015 That's ok! Your life isn't dedicated to the readers, you have your own life you need to take care of! The book shouldn't be on your top priority list! (No I am not being sarcastic) |
CartelDeath chapter 11 . 8/20/2014 Since it's been so long...does that mean you're dead? |
Dark Lord of the Fallen Angels chapter 11 . 7/18/2014 Omg u haven't updated in 2 years u have to update soon pwease! |
the white wolf Haruka chapter 11 . 7/7/2014 I LOVE this story so far! Please write the next chapter! :) :) |
Jostanos chapter 7 . 6/3/2014 And the beginning of the Toccata en Fugue in D minor plays in the background... Or was it the Twilight Zone theme? |