I liked this story. It was great about Hatter stealing Alice away to get married and then the Jabberwock stealing her back with Bander stuck in the middle. You're grammer was very bad. I'm geussing English is not the only language you speak, and I totally understand that. I speak another language too, but there are lots of different sites you can use to check your grammer. Also it seemed like in the end you were just pulling it out to make the story longer. My personal opinion is that you should have stopped with them moving into the new house, and not have had Winter at all. By the way, where did he disappear to? I loved Pendulums children. And Time and Pendulum taking over, that was just great!

It's agreat sequel but it souldbe ratedM

Hate to tell you this but there are errors in the fic and it's prequel.
The word called "bliddy" doesn't exist in any dictionary or books that I have ever read, the British uses the word "bloody" not bliddy.

It is a wonderful story but there is a slight problem, why would Jabberwock adopt Alice so quickly? I know she reminded him of his daughter Consetta but wouldn't that mean she is a replacement and they even barely knew each other in the past few months and then Jabberwock became a whiny clingy dad.

I advise you to get a Beta reader since there are times where I can spot slight errors in your fics.

I'm so sad it's over! I haven't read stories that pulled me in so much in a long time. I love how you portrayed the characters (especially Alice 'cause she wasn't overly helpless or illogically strong). It was down to earth but really creative. I really really enjoyed it. If you ever write another Alice in Wonderland story (I'm crossing my fingers) I'd be thrilled to read it. Thank you for the wonderful work!

I really like Jabberwocky's relationship with Alice or more his mannerisms towards her. Despite his somewhat tyrannical behavior, he's very sweet and loving towards her. I'm assuming there was a first part to this story? I shall have to give it a read. Keep up the great work.

OH BRAVA!XDDDDDDDDDD

THAT WAS ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC!XDDDDDDDDDD

I LOVE THIS STORY!

I HOPE YOU ARE PROUD HUN CUZ THAT WAS AMAZING! Im so happy with how your story turned out! SO adorable!

the ending was perfect! it couldnt be any better! :)

This is really good, but also, i found another inconsistency. In this chapter (chapter 34), Hatter introduces Alice to Pendulum, saying they've never met, apart from when Pendulum came and looked at her when she was asleep. However, I seem to recall (and I have just checked this (in chapter 28)) that Pendulum met her on the day of her escape from Shadowland.

I love your story, but, in this chapter, how you talked about Hatter trying to kiss Alice at the Masquerade, but she pushed him away. I seem to recall that, at that point, when Alice rejected him, he got all depressed, and then March gave him an extract of silvanrod flowers or something that would make him forget everything from that night. Can you please explain to me, as I am confused, how he remembered it then?

I Love This So Much :D

Awesome, thanks for the story.

Well! I've read Twisted and I just finished The Shadowlands. Yes there are many small flaws but that didn't stop it from being a really good story. I was entracned from the first sentence.

A really good Alice fan fic with so many new and believeable wonderland/shadowland characters. If i didn't know any better i would say that this was a sequel to Lewis Carroll's stories.

I was so happy and excited that my sister hit me and told me to shut up spouting how good this story was. Now i have many bruises.

Well done.

what a great story i really like it, this story influences me to draw pictures from alice in wonderland,thanx for the inspiration!-

I LOVE THIS STORY!

there should be a threqual! however short it may be... about the kids!

threqual: the sequal to a sequal

thats how you spell it right?

That's sorta neat.

flippin maynard. im gonna kill him.