This was wonderful, and so very Luke.

Loved this!

Some people feel uncomfortable for table with M rated stuff. I don't. It's a lot of fun to read. On the other hand, I felt weirdly uncomfortable with Will's open discussion about Lorelai in the diner. Almost as if she were a thing, not a person.
The proposal was a stunner. So pragmatic yet romantic at the same time. Sigh. The world needs more Luke's. Not enough to go around.

loved! loved! loved!

I wish there was more

Amazing. Will there be a sequel?

I loved this one! It was so sweet and so very, very Luke. You really write a mean story, I'm so glad I picked you to go through and read every story you've written :)

This is my all time favourite GG story. I find myself stumbling back upon it sometimes and I always have to read it, sometimes two or three times in a row.

I don't know what it is about it but something has me so drawn to this story. Its almost like this quiet longing between them that is so palatable it comes across in the simple conversation, even before the proposal.

The way you have Luke so quietly propose is amazing. It's almost as if he's asking her to accept him, whether she can see herself with him or not, he wants to be the one there for her. Having Lorelai realize at that moment how much she wants to say yes was beautiful. She knows she can't say yes to a proposal like that no matter how much she wants to, she wants a relationship with him with all the truths it will bring.

I love reading your stories and I can't wait for more!

Awh!

I love love love how Luke would have done that for Lorelai, would have married her so some other guy's baby wouldn't have to be fatherless. Soo cute how he proposed to her! I felt kinda bad when Lorelai finally told him it was just a false alarm, after going through all that trouble, I would have been embarrassed too! But it was so cute. [

Nice.

The cheesey part of me wanted her to just say yes. And then, of course, the literary part of me LOVED the way you did this. AWESOME job.

OH MY GOODNESS.. and I thought 'Patience Divine' was phenomenal. (Well they both are..but you get my drift..) I can't believe Luke proposed..holy crap. And the fate line at the end, I immediately thought love, and then thought about it a moment, thinking of Luke and Lorelai, and I knew you were referring to fate. How true it is..

Lovely.

One word says it all...

Will is he the C we all hated because he reads like a C. Surprise, Surprise Luke proposing to Lorelai I'm loving it finally. You really surprised me on that one. Luke thinking Lorelai is pregnant and C not wanting to stick around. Luke feeling that Lorelai shouldn't go through having a baby without a father. That's our Luke...Lorelai again making the first move kissing him. That's the way it should be..Luke giving Lorelai his mothers ring that's another surprise. You really had me on this one. You really need to write another chapter to complete what they started...

This fic does something a lot of others haven't been able to. That is show Luke's ability to be both Lorelai's friend and protector, but his willingness to cross the line if he found it necessary.

Amazing as always. :)

I got the four-letter word! Yay, me! LOL.

Man, this is depressing. I never want your stories to end! I just want them to go on forever, they're so good. And addicting. I have seriously read some of your fics three or four times. You just have this way of writing and developing plotlines so well, the reader doesn't even know that it's like 25,0 words long. They only know that it's a freaking AMAZING fic and that they want to get to the next word as fast as possible.

Anyhoo. In case you couldn't tell, I thoroughly enjoyed this fic. And you have another all written and ready for me to read. Yes!

Great job!

i really love your stories, they are so full of life und love, and that is simply amazing. I wish there was a second chapter of this story.