…Magnificent…and yet …so dark, so bloody and creepy and… ..I am having goosebumps...O_O"

Ooo...i liked this fics, but the best part was how you were using the "detective" to refer to L, and I was under the asumsion the narrator was L before, and i thought "so the detective is L, and the other is B", but then I remembered that B was faking as a private detective, and I was left spechless

Wow...that was a beautiful piece of work!

This was so interesting. I love your writing style!

Drop a line? Drop a line? I will gladly throw a novel! Well, perhaps not a literal novel. There's far too little room in this box for , this is wonderful! Excellent use of the creepy little nursery rhymes and other stories. This has a lovely ring and a nicely executed squalor about it.

That was great.

Oh that was great. The writing is just really...it fits. Superbly. B singing those songs and the poems? It all came together greatly!

It was confusing, but good.

I'm dropping a line all right.

Beautifully written, complete with the right touch to sadism and agnst and so many other things which only you can acheive.

Very, very well done.

B is effing nuts. O_O

But I liked this. Though there were some grammical errors, and some parts that I thought were worded oddly, I still like this alot. :D

Amazing.. I loved every dark, twisted second of it. It was truly like delving into the mind of B.. and I do love Bs mind.

I believe you capture him perfectly..

Thank you for writing this!

Amazing.

Dude! that was amazing!

I mean serously! I've been looking for stories like this. (cuz most stories are fluffs and cuddly) Man! Urs is like sadistic, sad and yet brilliant at the same time!

I freaking Love it!XD

Awe.

Really...Awesome. Beautifully written. The little old rhymes... Those fit the mood perfectly. And show that BB is a deranged maniac. (But he's a hawt deranged maniac.) This is so going in my C2 for the best DN oneshots! XD

I just feel so smart because I know what they're talking about. Myth of "Echo and Narcissus." My personal favorite of Greek mythology! (Don't mess with Aphrodite, Beyond. You'll get owned...)

There are so many things to like about this fic !

The writing is powerful and intense, as often found in your fics. And much more so when it's about BB. Seriously, despite BB fics being very scarce at the time, most authors -you included- write him excellently, so much so that I found myself rapidly growing to love him. It's my belief that BxL is gonna be my OPT soon, might even replace LightxL since I prefer Light/L to L/Light (I hate bitchy Light, and innocent Light is just boring) but the fandom consists of 50 percent of each, so it limited my reading of this pairing. I do read L/Light sometimes, not much though.

But I digress.

On to your fic. Beautiful writing and BB aside, love CRUCIFIED L. Nice equivelent to the foot massage in regard to Kira. And the image is... breathtaking? Love the reference of Dorian Gray and utterly adore the fic's title. Very fitting indeed.

Please don't let it be your only BxL fic. Write more BB. Really excitedly await your second BxL.