hahahahaha

Yesssss!

I loved this so much, you've got Johnny's 'voice' so well, and everyone else too. I love that Johnny was innocent, though not in a cheesy way.

I at first thought dally then Steve then johnny

I like your story! It's really good and some of the things two-bit said were really funny.

Wow!

I am new to Outsiders FanFic, and your stories were great - so funny! Sorry if that's creepy since they were posted so long ago.

I hope you plan on writing more soon!

HA! Two-Bit at the end! Loved Steve's reaction but Two-Bit-priceless!

no try again

Okay, so my review might be a little late - only like 5 years or so xD - but I'm gonna leave one anyway.

When it was mentioned in the book (Steve's 'speech' to Sylvia about leaving Johnny alone), I really wanted to know how that came about, so those type of fics have always caught my attention, but this one takes the cake. :) I loved how it was written, how you characterized Sylvia (the 'Tuh!'s - I loved that), the way you have Johnny, and I also love how you brought in Steve and Two-Bit at the end, and kept Steve's speech in there.

"Steve stalked ahead, carrying on with his rant, but Two-Bit pulled me back a second and leaned forward to whisper in my ear:

'She may be trash, but, Johnny, man – nice going.'"

- I absolutely adore that. Leave it to ol' Two-Bit to make everything light-hearted and funny. :)

All in all, I really loved this. :) Great job.

HAHA, I love this. Your characterization of Johnny and Sylvia were perfect! Well done(:

Hey there!

This is to let you know that this story has been nominated for Best OC (Sylvia) over at Greaser Gangs and Social Clubs Awards! Congratulations and best of luck!

- Tens

Our Link(just get rid of the spaces):

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LOVE IT! I knew it was Johnny! And I love that you make him into a regular teenage boy and not a saint. Great job this fic was really funny. And Two-Bit's reaction- priceless.

I have to agree with one of the reviewers - at first I thought that it was Dally at first. I like that you didn't make Johnny a total candyass.

The fact that I was actually reading about a small bull session of Johnny and a girl was pretty amazing, and really interesting. The whole time I was crossing my fingers he wouldn't be a wimp like how he is in most fics.

I'm really fond of all of your fics, don't know why, they are all just so amazing (: Keep up the good work!

Two-Bit was hilarious! Nice going!

That was amazing Zevie. One of the best takes I've seen to Sylvia comming onto Dallas and the way you handled Johnny's character is incrediable, I can't write Johnny for the life of me and you did it perfect. Well done.