Best Chapter ever. I loved the AxA Moment. when i read it i was like you just became my favorite writer lol keep it up

Please update :)

I liked that chapter, but there is one thing, with Archie's mum's death, ARchie's fear is IRRATIONAL, it means there's no reason for it, but other wise pretty cute!

Great story- or what I've read of it, in any case...

One small discrepancy. You realize that Canada to Mexico would only have maybe two hours of time change, or not even?

That was great!

Goodness! Wow, weel, first off, this is dazzeling diamond here, reviewing under a joint account used solely for Greek Mythology. So, just know that it's me!

Anyway, so glad you updated! I've been looking forward to this for awhile, and I have to say, I was not disappointed.

It was cool to have a chapter more devoted to the evil entity that is CRONUS! I found his Spanish mutterings interesting, I think I caught snippets...something about eternal sleep, and waking and...causing thunder? Either way, interesting stuff...it might be boring to forever think in English!

You captured his personality very well, his brusque but amusing way of speaking, his delight in evil and all.

That part with him freeing the Synara, that was intense, and when she flew away away, I had a very worried feeling growing in my stomach!

Then that last scene, all I can say is that I'm highly curious as to what happens, I'm guessing our heroes will come and save her...or at least find her, whether it's too late or not :S! GAH, cannot wait for more!

hey! good to see an update! keep up the good work! looking forward to the sequel!

Hey there! Dazzeling diamond here! I am incredibly sorry for the VERY, VERY late review, but school (I'm in my final year of school, and I literally, have ONE exam left and then it's ALL OVER!) has been a rather consistent pain in the neck, causing an inconvenient snag in my reading and reviewing!

ANYWAY! To review! I gotta give you kudos for the excellent way in which you write the characters. Their group interaction is excellent, everyone is very much the way they should be...and I love the bond between Theresa and Atlanta, that little sisterhood thing. I gotta say though, I totally adored the Neil and Herry moments, that were in this chap. Neil for the comic effect he always has, with his vanity and what not, Herry for his adorably oafish behaviour. Just in general, they were both very good in this chapter.

I SIMPLY loved the moment with the "making a wish on the eyelash" thing, partially because that's something I do out of habit, but also because it seemed so fitting for Jay/Theresa moment. And what followed...what can I say? :P It was so appropriate for Theresa to be annoyed with his apprehension, and then after that, he finally let go of his THINKING, and just went with it. AW. Gorgeous!

That is so sweet, that you were inspired by my OC drawing! GAH, I simply must check out yours! I have actually done a lot more, recently, for a greek myth. fic, with all original characters (if your at all interested, link is on the profile). But seriously, I love this story and am TOTALLY looking forward to the sequel! With your relaxed but engaging writing style, I have no doubt, it will be awesome! Keep writing! xo, dazzeling diamond (of rubies'n'diamonds)

p.s. Please excuse any typos...I'm not incompetent, just lazy!

hey, good chapter! so this is the end until the sequel? either way looking forward to your next chapter, whether it be for this or the sequel!

What happened to Synara? it's a bit of loose end (though I suppose you'l probably tie it up in the sequel).

hey keep it up, work through the writers block! looking forward to the next part/chapter!

Wow, this is amazing! I had to add it and favourite it right away. Please update it soon! I love the Archie/Atlanta, most defenately my fav pairing of the series XD. Great going you realy got all of the characters bang on.

EH!

lol sweet chapter m8 :D

hope you can updte soon

That was so great! I really liked how you brought that guy back, the swimming thing totally works, and I LOVED the kissing scene! so cute! D