Reviews for Blood Slayer
Mark Sinfield chapter 18 . 2/9
HOPE YOU CAN TAKE THIS UP AGAIN
N. A. Wennerholm chapter 18 . 4/1/2019
A bitch of a leader who needs a scolding and a good spanking and taught to have compassion and to listen to the feelings of others. Ivy is just a piece of shit.

As for the Minister for magic, he needs to be spanked and removed from office he his a daft unthinking moron who is full of himself and only cares about his position and power he is a stinking corrupt piece of Shit. And when told the truth of thinks he rejects it far too often. In fact, most British Magicals are fools.
Richy chapter 1 . 7/27/2015
I don't get why you chose to make your first chapter like this. I mean, really? He didn't realize he would be expected to eat normal food if he went to this school? He then picks up silverware after putting on gloves, completely forgetting the SILVERware would need to touch his tongue and lips? And unfortunately he couldn't change what the spoon was made of, because silver is impervious to magic or something?... Really? He couldn't, i don't know, disappear the silver spoon, and flash up a new one? He couldn't just forget about the spoon, and put the bowl of soop to his lips? I feel like with the first chapter especially, and a few more after that, it needs something that connects with the reader. Makes them think its cool, or really interesting. What the first chapter has shown me is that harry is dumb enough to forget that as a vampire, he cant put a silver spoon in his mouth. Did you think we wouldn't get the hints that harry is a vampire, so you decided to throw in the rest to be completely sure we had no doubt about him being a vampire? And btw... Ugh. Its a vampire story, about an immortal creature who attacks humans, and drinks their blood. But this vampire seems like another goth, with caked on eye liner, who just needs a hug. I just finished a dark, half vampire, harry story. In it, he he forced his slaves to go nude when they are alone, ruined Dumbledoofuses life, and slapped Voldemort to death, so you can understand how this was disappointing.
burntblood.1982 chapter 16 . 5/18/2014
please update this story
Flying Chrissy chapter 18 . 1/29/2014
Cool story! Look forward to the next update.
Guest chapter 18 . 4/16/2013
update and finish story
Karou WindStalker chapter 18 . 2/9/2013
Wish this had continued.
Vampirecutie447 chapter 18 . 1/2/2013
You haven't updated since 2008...I'm not even going to say anything.
fallxnrobin chapter 18 . 10/28/2012
Please please please update your story some day soon! It has been very long since you last update it. Why? D: Even if you don't want to continue the story, then maybe you can put it up for adoption. I'm sure some people will be willing to continue your story. :)
Suomalainen chapter 1 . 10/9/2012
Hanskida college WTF? Why is it named that way? that isn't even finnish
Guest chapter 18 . 7/9/2012
Really good :) Please, please, please update soon :( :D
IforIgnore chapter 18 . 5/26/2011
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! YOU CAN'T END IT THERE!

Please please please continue this! I loved reading it and want to read more!

When (it better not be if) you continue, can you please email me? I'm unable to story alert. :)
A-Z-animal-freak chapter 18 . 2/4/2011
Why are you sorry? This is really, really awesome, I love it and keep up the awesome work!
WhiteElfElder chapter 18 . 12/11/2010
Interesting story so far. I like how Harry is relatively unknown and just another wizard.
Bloodfire87 chapter 18 . 12/2/2010
Holy Cow! That was absolutely amazing...But oh so cruel...leaving it alone like that. Hope to see the update soon! I'm loving the whole half-vampire thing with Harry...Cheers!

Bloodfire87
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