MUGENFUU FEELS.
I SHIP THIS WAY TOO MUCH.
But I think you portrayed Mugen's conflicting feelings very well, in such little words.

Wow I like it. That fits Mugen very well and would explain a lot :p

really nice!

ajajaj i think thats exactly what he loves about her, especially the her innocence and purity, and i think he wants to corrupt her XD for real :P

for someone like him , with his personallity the idea of taking her innocence must be very interesting ;)

This is really good, it's like you ripped this directly out of Mugen's brain

Oh my. Very very good.

OMG! i really love this story! it's my absolute favorite! i have read it like a million times!

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gwaah.

... that was good.

Wow! Simple but descriptive. Totally makes sense. Love it!

Wow... I can totally see Mugen wanting that. Nice story.

OMG CUTE! I thought you did well on Mugen! He is such a complicated character! But you did amazing! I really liked it

Brilliant. I can only hope to be as canon in my own stories as you have been with Mugen.

This is exactly how I imagined him to think; and what he is drawn to in Fuu.

YAY! Don't know why I am 'yay-ing' but I really liked this, and am super giddy. I think that you did a good job of getting into Mugen's head, I know that I would have a heck of a time trying, probably get pissed that it didn't turn out right.

Anyway, good work! I liked this heeps!

Hm, that's what I originally though Mugen would feel like...nice work.

Nicely done

i think its totally in character

and it is so good and all so true of what he wants

good cute oneshot

Perfect!