my my what a gentleman you are Squall

Fuu sure knows how to crack that whip!

have read it sooner if I had thought that I hadn't already read it, lol. Can't wait to see what happens between Squall and Fujin next!

I love this story cupel fujin is

The best I love the ch but but did'nt she alredy get a new gf I thot that u sed so in

A prevys ch any way love the

Story best fujin story I have read yet by

Very intense action there. And you created a unique GF as well. Very nice. I'm curious about what element would this GF be, earth/dark? I'm also not quite sure about the name...uh, Banshee right? It's sort of an undead witch if I recall correctly.

It sounded like the GF was incredibly hard to beat, considering even Zell had a hard time fighting it. Not really sure if other cadets would fare just as well as Fujin did, or heck even survive the test. Ifrit was a breeze compared to your Banshee.

Good work. Can't wait for your next update.

wow, i was kinda expecting a little more action,but,*shrugs shoulders* can't have everything. hope you update soon!

Wow, a very unlikely couple indeed. But hey, you've certainly made a fan out of me.

I'm looking forward to how you would further advance their relationship. Very nice and sweet on how this chapter turned out, yet completely believable and in character. The story flow is extremely smooth, especially in the last few chapters. And your writing has improved a lot since the beginning.

Will definitely put this story in alert. A bloody good job. Thumbs and toes up! (or rather extended...)

This story is actually pretty interesting!

great story hope u update soon

OMG! Super Cute, I am so happy you updated I have been waiting, and let me tell you you don't dissapoint good chapter. Update whenever k.

pretty good, hope you update you're still looking for a beta,i could do it

decent you need a beta, i could be your beta.

Wow... Rinoa bashing, Fuijin dating, and Zell teaching? Great so far, can't wait till you update again! Oh, and you might need

to touch up on your grammar a little. But apart from that, really

good fiction

That was such a aborable chapter can't wait for your next chapter, so update when you can and keep up the good work.

good 's been a while since i read this story,but my email alerts stopped working so i had to check it ,hope you update soon!